Best. Fic. EVER! OMG Seriously, this was extremely well written, if not a bit long; it might have worked better in chapters, but it was excellent nonetheless. I simply adored it. You friggin rule.

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*falls over giggling* oh my stomach,...oh my stomach...my poor poor stomach...ouch...

I liked it Alot. I would have liked alittle more if Xander had no powers at all. Just good old Xander power.

This is the first fic of yours I had ever read, and I LOVE it...after this a actually saw the ED movies and got my friends hooked on them too...LOVE IT!

Great story i liked reading it and would look forward to a sequal. I only have one suggestion. their were a couple parts in the story where you could of umm... well cut down on the cheese. Other then that good work and keep up the great job or something like that.

Awesome job! Just one question; is this version of part one supposed to be a revision? If so, I can't find any difference in quality from the first two versions; the latter still whup-butt and take names!

Great story keep up the good work.