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Reviews for: The First Time
ewriter
2009-07-22 . chapter 1
Lovely
NinjaGirlRebecca
2008-11-24 . chapter 1
hm for some reson I think my friends and I have had that confersation at the beginging our selfs jest diferent men HAhAHA NICE
darlingtigerangel
2008-07-25 . chapter 1
I heart remus and tonks they're so cute together. great writing!
romulusrapier
2007-10-27 . chapter 1
Very nice darling. You're better than you give yourself credit for!

Tonks and Remus are always wonderful, and everyone loves some smut every once in a while. Or maybe more that that ;)

Just one little thing: you used trousers twice in the same sentence which kind of sounds weird when you read it. Just pointing it out ^^

Otherwise, this really was very good.
Talia
2007-09-23 . chapter 1
Raunchy.
moonlit4rose
2007-05-19 . chapter 1
that was bloody gud...mke the nxt chapter a bit naughtier tho...like remus tieing tonks up and sum harmless spanking wudnt hurt aswell...lolz x (hpe u mke anova chapta!)
jessa-beth
2006-11-18 . chapter 1
Thank you for writing this. o.o It made my day.
Watch Out for Yellow Moon
2006-09-15 . chapter 1
GREAT! Holy cow, I've only just gotten into the whole Remus/Tonks ship, and with this fic I'll be hooked. This is REALLY GOOD! Seriousy! One thing though: " brushing against .. trousers as she undid the button of said trousers" kinda ruins the flow in the whole lemon scene. If you didn't have to repeat trousers, the entire story would be PERFECT. But leaving it is fine too, just trying to help. Anyways, great job. Loved it!
Peace,
Yellow Moon
Bardlover
2006-09-12 . chapter 1
Thank you for my daily dose of fanfic smut. : D
go.suck.on.a.lemon
2006-09-11 . chapter 1
absolutely wonderful. my favourite pairing too.
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