 Setfiregirl 2009-05-08 . chapter 13Ah! O_O I'm scared. I looked at the start date on the story, and it was in 2006. And the last update was last year. I'm really scared. PLEASE DON'T WAIT THAT LONG TO UPDATE AGAIN!! *whimpers* PLEASE!! I <3 this story! And Ryou = super awesomeness. And Ryou-Ichigo = better than crack. Somehow, I had this...just...I don't know. I knew that Max was Ryou's dad. I don't know HOW, but when I was reading the second chapter, my sister was all like "Who's 'Max'?" and I was like "Some guy, who I have my suspicions about being Ryou's dad" and she was all disbelieving, but seriously, I just had this feeling...PLEASE! DON'T TORTURE ME! UPDATE! I'LL CRY! I'LL BEG! I'LL SCREAM! I'LL BLACKMAIL!! I NEED AN UPDATE!! |
 aria_sunset 2009-01-07 . chapter 13 When I checked in the TMM fandom, i was so excited...hehe...at last you've updated.
You really know how to spin words together and make an exciting story. ^_^ I wish I could do that...-sigh-
Though I'm kind of wondering why chapter 12 and 13 (in definition) isn't just combined together...??
I really hope you'll update soon. At last the confrontation with the aliens has come and I really can't wait to read it...^_^...
~aria |
 Mew-Sahara 2008-12-14 . chapter 13Boy, I'm glad you posted this up. I had apparently already review the last chapter, so I couldn't put in my input.
I'm not quite sure why, but every time I read a chapter of your story, it's like a world I've never known about TMM is opening up. Sure, it's a fanfiction story, but I'm learning things about the characters that were originally in the mangas/anime, too.
Your writing and amount of utter detail is really inspiring. I may never be able to produce something on such a high, amazing scale as you, but at least ideas are sprung each time I read.
I wholeheartedly love your story. And oh, how it's worth it to be delaying my studies of DNA a little farther. C:
The ending act of chapter 11 and this short lil' chapter bit was really amazing. Just the thought that Ryou would want to show his father the café... Really struck my heart.
I'm probably going to cry at some point while reading this story. I'm such a sap.
And a very on the edge sap, at that. What a cliffhanger you left us at! |
 NikkiNya6 2008-12-13 . chapter 12I love this story :D It has such an awesome storyline with not a single mistake! Keep up the good work and update soon! :) |
 MewStrawberry 2008-12-12 . chapter 1i like this story the same way i like Dreaming in Color. I love reading it from Ryous point of view. Keep UPDATING! (please read mine :) |
 dbzgtfan2004 2008-12-12 . chapter 1This is a good story. Please continue. Ichigo and Ryou forever. |
 The Moot Reviewer 2008-12-03 . chapter 12I enjoy this story very much! Keep it up! :) |
 aria_sunset 2008-09-08 . chapter 12 This is such a great story!
I think this is the no.1 must-read in the TMM fandom..
Btw, just one question...in ch.12 you mentioned Kish and Pai but in the previous chapters you said they were back at the cafe and there were no news from them for nearly an hour..
when did they get back with Zakuro, Minto, Retasu and Jishou Shirogane??
I'll be waiting for your next update..^_^...
~aria |
 Violist 2008-07-20 . chapter 12You are such a great author! Keep going with the story! It has such a good plot! |
 X.Ember.Uchiha.X 2008-07-13 . chapter 12Great chapter! I have been waiting for it for so long... I wonder if Ryou's mom is alive... I can't wait for the next chapter so keep writing! |
 Mew-Sahara 2008-07-13 . chapter 12It's back! :'D *tears of joy*
I really wonder how Shirogane's dad came back, now. I'm really interested... You've gotten me hooked all over again! *laughs*
'"He's just like that blond guy," Kisshu muttered, "Sneaky."' -Spoken all too well, Kisshu. ;] |
 Very Annoied AIMelody 2008-07-13 . chapter 12Cool |
 Kitty-Katz-Katz 2008-07-12 . chapter 12Dude! =.= After seven months, we get an intermission? Man, I wanted some powerful OYAKO-NESS. Some more conflict between Ryou and Jishou! Dx -dies-
You'd better overdose us on Oyako-ness in the next chapter. -eyes suspiciously- |
 XxStrawberryKittyxX 2008-07-12 . chapter 12Hi!
Yes, an update!
Nice chapter; it explained things. I don't have much to say other than I want an update as soon as it's written!
XxStrawberryKittyxX |
 digitalmonster911 2008-07-06 . chapter 11Oh, big cliffy! LOVE it so far, and yes, some Ichigo x Ryou fluff WOULD be good. So, Professor Shirogane DIDN'T die in the fire after all...but what about Ryou's mother? |