I just finish reading this. Come one and update this. It is very good.

I really enjoy how you have blended the two universes, great writing!

Why would Earth give away a city-ship to a bunch of idiots like the 12 colonies?

hello lol
your story is fantastic
i hope you write speedly the next chapter because this story is WONDERFULL
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Cool stuff, update soon plz it's been a year

SE

Wow! A most engaging story. Looking forward to the partnership between Adama and O'Neill, an unstoppable duo if I ever saw one.
It'd be great to see an update to this. The Titan needs to go toast some frakkin' chromejobs!
What class of vessel are the Lantean ships docked at Avalon? Aurora-class?
What's Apollo's take on the 'kidnapping' of his father?
All in all, moar please!

Please, by the Gods, finish this!

I have enjoyed reading this story and look forward to the conclusion. Will it be finished?

Wow, what an awesome story! I am on the edge of my seat in anticipation and can't wait to see what else you have in store.

Tyrchon

Pretty good, intense story. Nice work incorporating all the characters from both stories.

One question though...wouldn't it have been easier for them to just shoot Macmillan?
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Hi there!
I was following this on twisting the hellmouth, and enjoyed it so much I wandered over here to find out if there were more chapters. I'm really enjoying this incredibly funny, believable cross! I'm also enjoying the casual references to other shows- Hawkeye, and Chekov, being the main two. Keep it up, I'm looking forward to the newest installments!

I just found your story and am really enjoying it. This is very well written. I usually don't like OC, but yours add to the story without detracting from it. Very nice job.

I’ve just recently decided to start watching BSG, and decided to read this fic again. And while it is a good story, I have noticed some spelling errors in certain BSG characters names. The President’s name is spelt Roslin, not Rosalin, and it’s Cain, not Kane (for the late Admiral). I was looking at the 1st chapter, where you’ve listed who’s who, and you have Roslin spelt correctly, but then in the chapters (or at least some of the chapters), you put an ‘a’ in it. I find that interesting.

Mary Sue much?
Just no.

Overall a decent story, but I lost all interest towards the end. I could care less for earth politics, even though I know that has to be a big part of any nBSG/Stargate story.


One thing though, you are trying way, way, way to hard to make Pierce into some uber version of General O'Neill. A little sarcasm is fine, but every word out of her is an attempt to be funny and after awhile its just plain annoying. No one in the Air Force would act the way she does, especially to her superior officers. Even Jack O'Neill and Sheppard don't act that way in the series.