 Random Kiwi Girl 2007-01-18 . chapter 1Wow, it kind of makes me glad that I don't live in America. I remember having to do a report on it when it happened because my class watched it on the news one day. Anyway, it's a good fic and I enjoyed reading it. |
 Clayxyinyang 2006-12-09 . chapter 1Is his real name really Clayton, or did u just add that?
Yes, his sis's name's Jessie, that's no lie.
your story's good; deep and very meaning-ful.
*clapclapclap* |
 xxAngelofDethxx 2006-09-14 . chapter 1 HEY!Sorry I haven't been on in such a long time. heh heh. Don't hurt ME! Anyways, I like it alot. I knew someone who died on th plane of the one that crashed into the Pentagon so thanks for making it a serious fic. Another great masterpiece from the infamous KAI!
-xxAngelofDethxx |
 Lavenderpaw 2006-09-13 . chapter 1This is unexpected,a 911 through Clay's eyes but still very enlightening nonetheless.It's only natural to do something to commemorate the people who lost their lifes.Very nice work.
LP |
 dArkliTe-sPirit 2006-09-13 . chapter 1Jessie is the sister's canon name, it was said several times in "The Black Vipers".
And...wow, that was excellent. It's amazing, what this anniversary has created. Iliked how you described the emotion in this. You rule. |
 Kiliko 2006-09-12 . chapter 1 Clay does have a sister. She makes her only debut in the episode
"The Black Vipers". |
 Brown Eyed Sage 2006-09-11 . chapter 1i was a seventh grader as well at the time. that day will always be in me forever. i was living in Connecticut at the time so it really hit ** me. i've always went to New York more times than how many fingers on both my hands.
btw, her name is Jesse. just look for the episode called 'The Black Vipers' on and see for yourself.
until next time. |
 sliver wolf demon 2006-09-11 . chapter 1 no one will EVER forget that day, I have'nt, I was in 4th grade at the time, I was too busy thinking about school to really see what was going on. looking back at it...it seems like only a dream that all of us want to wake up from. good story and bliss you and our country. |
 spinningisfun 2006-09-11 . chapter 1tears I know how you feel I was like 8 on Sept.11 2001 love it- |
 sakume 2006-09-11 . chapter 1I think Clay does have a sister, not sure. This almost got a tear out of me. The only reason it didn't was the picture of the cartoon characters talking. I remember where I was, too. I was thirteen...I was angry that my cartoons weren't on, and some stupid news thing was on every channel. Now I just feel terrible...God Bless America. You did very well. May we remember His good grace, and how He has kept us close to him. |