awesome first chapter! i'm excited to see a new story from you. =) can't wait to read more!!

I like this but my only complaint is that it's too short. I love stories like this-where it goes beyond the Silver Millenium and explains how things in that time period came to be. Very nice.

Amen to nine planets!

I love this story it was beautiful and a very interesting theory. Kinda lord of the ringsish, but i really like it.

that was very interesting