I luv this fanfic! its hilarious! it reminds me of me and my buds when we hang out together :3

This is hilarious, I can't stop myself laughing! :D lol, ... "20 gil says we pull back and let him fight the next Flan" ... lol
You and Tokyokitty's fanfic is great with a lot of humour! I love how each of them have a different kind of personality. I especially like Tira, she's a selkie right? She's cool.
Some few spelling mistakes, like head should have been heed in your second chapter, and confusedly - is that a word? Never heard of it. A few typos in places too but nothing major.
Great fanfic going, you guys must update! Keep on updating!