great story can't wait to find out what happens next please update as soon as you can thanks for writiing a great story

This was really good!

wow...

i simply cannot tell with words how much i loved this.. the drama, angst and romance made me feel...god, you´re such a wonderful writer!!

thank you very much, really!

I LOVED IT PERFECT WRITING TO THE TEE
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great story.

I love the story!

this is the best story i have read on this site bravo i truly have no words to express this storys level of awsome

Just found and read your story. it has become one of my favorites. All the elements were well done. well thought out. The story flowed really well. fantastic job.

Nicely done...

What a wonderful story! I've read time stories but not a single dimensional story and this one was fantastic. I didn't want to read the end simply because I didn't want it to be over.

I don't know how much you know about british expats (people who leave britain to go live in other countries, generally for retirement.)
The common places that spring to mind are australia, cyprus, spain and portugal. looking it up on askjeeves canda is also supose to be populer.

These places are relatively cheep(compared to British house prices) and also have nice weather. People also tend to relocate to holiday destinations.

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Other then seeing the word america in every chapter your story is a good read.

I just wanted to say that this story is not only one of my favorites, but is one of the best that I have read. I do hope that you intend to follow it up with at least one sequel. Maybe just let us know what happened to these characters; if they had any children or not.

Thank you again for writing it and sharing it with us.

Sincerely,

Daniel J. Durham

This is one of my all time favorite stories. I've just finished my fourth reading of it and it is still awesome. I wish there were more dimensional travel stories like this. Thanks for writing it.

love the story, is there going to be a sequel?

This is an amazing story, another amazing story. Has anyone told you guys that you are brilliant writers? Anyway, this has to be my favourite one-shot on the site, though it helps that it is over 50,0 words long :)

Keep Writing

Princess Ducky