 donna79 2006-11-12 . chapter 1How did I miss this one? I didn't get a notice for this one. But it's really good. I like that you made Blink to be the smart one. I don't read that many where he's smart. But I like it. Poor Mush, he shouldn't be afraid to be himself. |
 Rustie73 2006-09-17 . chapter 1William Randolph Hearst High School is a brilliant name for their rival school.
I love your jovial Blink. When you’ve got a smile like his you might as well show it off.
Blink is the perfect match for the frustrated and confused Mush.
“So, how come Seitz offered to get you a tutor? I mean, he doesn't do that for anybody.”
“Probably because I'm, like, one step up from being retarded.” . . . . “And nobody wants to be mean to the mentally disabled.”
I’m sure that I would have done a lot better in algebra if I had Blink as a tutor instead of a seventy-two year old nun.
This is a great one-shot. |
 SkitteryIdol 2006-09-15 . chapter 1oh!! that was really good! excellent job. keep it up! |
 SusieMinnesota 2006-09-13 . chapter 1all i can say is aw...how adorable! two gorgeous guys who are "attracted" to each other and then kiss...i must say that you captured the essence of awkward teenage love very realistically |
 MushLover92 2006-09-12 . chapter 1O yay! And so cute! Loved it very much. Especially since Mush was in it!
MushLover |
 Banisters 2006-09-12 . chapter 1Aw, that was adorable. I love how you captured Mush's frustration about algebra. I feel exactly the same.
Geez, how do you find time to write things so well?
Oh, by the way, I love this line:
“I'm not sure, really.”
I thought it was cute, because most people always make up reasons behind nicknames, and you just decided not to.
So um. Rock on. |
 Braids21 2006-09-12 . chapter 1AW! that was so cute! |