Well, well, soldier...

LOL

LMAO

ROFL

That sums up my thoughts on this thing.

And also this: Time pimp!Sets FTW!

Favorite quote: “Oh, a few. Did you know that Sappho was a screamer?” I totally LOL-ed at that.

And tons of 4º Wall breaking. LMAO I like that.

So. Nice work, son.

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

lol

loved this fic

..the heck? with all due respect...get on with the story! :P

*thumb up* nice fourth wall breaking :P

lol yeah writer-jm so need to update his works

anyway...onwards to the next chapter :)

lol, nice fic. im going to go through the rest of it now

I have an idea that might work. I started thinking about it when you put on the last chapter. Pm me.

*lol*

Cute, very cute. Good job

lol

"I keep thinking of Hotaru wearing a beret and fake mustache, while she and a bespectacled Chibi-Usa test urban myths at the Hikawa Jinja…"

Yeah that would be funny

lol Will you be updating this in the future?

very funny story. i love mythbusters, so it was cool that you included it.

This is great. The whole scene with Makoto storming in to fight Setsuna was great! They really need to stop this though. But then again if they keep going they might actually find someone that Setsuna cares for and that person isn't actually taken by someone else. Great story can't wait to see how the rest of it goes.

Such an amusing read, so out of it that it strike humor. I simply love how you have no inhibition on coincidences. _

You killed Mamoru!

Yay!

*gives cookie*

Hi! I didn't know how I found this story... Oh, wait! I actually remembered to put a story alert this time! (insert hallelujah chorus)

OMG, you killed Mamoru! (moment of silence) Took ya long enough! LOL

I also like how you're showcasing more pairings and adding in a lot more fun! The sky is the limit and shoujo-ai doesn't want to stop!

I do enjoy that there are multiple deaths. Personally, I'd prefer the Japanese one, who happens to be a cute young woman!

I also like Rei and Usa's mumbled lines! You're definitely keeping the shoujo-ai crowd well fed!

So you've got Haruka and Michiru plotting? This will be neat!

O.O Wow. Looks like Sets has had an interesting past! (By the way, thanks for keeping it more than obvious that she's going to want a woman! Ambiguity sucks!) And she's been with "both" of Usa's moms? I don't think it would be completely odd for her to go with Usa... But since there's Rei's undying love, she can take a pass. She probably knows how Rei's feeling! (maybe)

Sets the time pimp? Oh, you are so cool to use that! Haruka probably created that herself didn't she? Possessed you and demanded that you put that in the story! LOL

So Sets has another date? I can't wait to see who it is!

(imagining Chibi-Usa with a shotgun) Okay, now that's cool... I mean Hotaru gets a naginata and Sets gets a staff. C-Usa needs some power too! I really dig the Mythbusters reference and like your mental images. (Now if only the inspiration was strong enough... Okay so who knows...)

Okay so both princess come close to confessing, then bad things happen! Too bad. There'll be more time to clear that all up!

O! "Death by temporal paradox!" Sounds painful! But it's appropriate! Ya know, ironically, you didn't have to kill Chibi-Usa if you're going to have Rei to be the new "father"! 'Cause then the rest of the senshi would be trying to figure out how C-Usa's still alive. Although that would leave it open for them to assume Mamo's going to be rez'd... Okay, your way is the best! (I get lost in though sometimes... It can be a long side trip...)

So Death #1 tries to strike up a conversation with Hotaru, the Senshi of Death? Boy is he asking for it! But it's good that they're dishing out advice!

(bright bulb) Hotaru's going to Minako's! I finally figured it out! (I'm as dingy as her sometimes... sad)

Hmm... About the end notes... Did I tell you I was a guy, or did you figure it out? I was just curious because I kinda keep my gender a secret. Mostly because a lot of females respect me because my writing tends to be feminine. So if it wouldn't be too much trouble, could you change that? (And am I giving off any hints that I should be watching out for?)

Sorry for the trouble! I really love your story and am eager to see more of it! Hurrah for a happy Sets ending!

Sincerely,

writer-jm