Powerful and captived. I read this one mostly in one go and right now I have to swallow the bitterness of this chapter and I re-read the end four times to make sure Yami really did died. Was in denial I guess. Even though some stories have made me re-read some parts twice it never happened four times in a row. You have a real talent to get some one close to your characters and make the random harsh events life can throw at you feel even more painful. Amazing story in short words.

I will watch out for your last chapter when it comes and will be greatly anticipating it.

i hate yugi such a ** ** and he acts like a poor maiden but he is such a tease i hate him , poor seto he havehis house full of ** specially that one i hate that character.


sorry you wrote good and i like the part yami-seto but i heete yugi he sould die

Your story, your characters. . . you can do with them as you like. And even though the chapter was well written, I have to admit that as the 'reader' that I was disappointed with the direction you took in bringing this story line to a close.

There were just so many open possiblities that this story line could have taken, but I can understand that after 2 years you probably want to go on to something else, and probably would just like to write complete at the end of this and go on to something else.

Pity you can't pull a "Dallas" situation, and have Seto waking up to find that Yami's death was all a bad dream and go on from there.

Look forward to future works. . .

NO! How sad! *Was just crying just now.* Very good chapter

You killed Yami? Oh my god. I feel bad for Seto and Jou but especially for thier children. I hope Seto lets Yugi and Jou stay. Poor Marik, too. All these teens with babies. Good chapter.

OMG chu finally updated. x.x


Aw you killed Yami. How could you kill Yami?!

Wait...I killed him in my story too...I don't wanna be at work I want to kick you so that you write the next chappy again dammit. >> Grawr

I actually cried reading this, dear. I never expected him to die, but I feel bad for not reviewing the last chapter either.

I'm just guessing the twins were either natural or C-section, but I know you don't go into those kind of details. Just me trying to figure it out.

update please

So how many more chapters are there going to be? It's going great so far!

This story is totally mad. Twists, turns, and heaven knows what else. My only complaint is the "mood" swings. If real pregnant women had them as you are displaying them then they would all be in homes for the hopelessly hormonal.

Hope you update soon.

lol, poor Mokie.oh well,great chappie!XD

udpate soon!
-TT

I'm glad you updated. I hope your vacation is good. I loved the chapter. I hope this puts Seto into labor so he can deliver already. I hope Sophie works out for them.

Hahaha! Amazingly funny as always. :D

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

O.O; Twisted indeed.