Hey, this is the first SUPERMAN RETURNS-Centric fanfiction I've read that doesn't try to off or get rid of Richard White in some henious way. In fact, this is probably the first SMR-Fanfiction where I wasn't glaring daggers at Clark Kent. That aside, this is a very interesting story.

At first I groaned "God, not another 'Freaky Friday' inspired story..." But this is manages to focus not so much on the fact that Clark and Richard have body-swapped, but their copping with the fact. The characterization is nicely executed, and Lois' personality isn't so hard-nosed and bitchy. Overall, I've enjoyed what you posted here (especially the chapter four, with all the "Matrix" refrences).

If you ever decided to update, I'll be around.

Sakura123

Is there any chance you might be coming back to this eventually? I really liked it. :-)

I'm really enjoyin this idea. I hope you return to it soon a s I'm very interested in seeing where you take it.

well finally! (Sorry, i too was once a student: i know how it is to get bogged down...) Liked this, liked the fact that the two of them are interacting so well. And you have an eye for detail about how wandering around in someone else's body might actually work, which me likes. The only problem i have (and it's more a personal thing than a comment on the writing which is excellent) is that Lois doesn't remember the whole shagging superman thing. If i'd had someone's baby and didn't remember doing the deed then i'd be mighty miffed... Sorry i'll stop ranting now. As i said, personal thing. But please update more often, i'm really enjoying this... And remember: there is no spoon...

Neo? What has Matrix to do with... AH! :-)

Clark is teaching Richard to fly... thats simply great! I love it!

"And several hundred thousand years of human evolution went screaming down the drain."

*ROTFL*

Please, more, soon!

I really like it!

Clark and Richard are going to be friends in this storie and that's a complete new idea I think. But why shouldn't it work? They are both cute and kind and they love the same woman.

I'm curious what's coming next!

Oh yeah I liked it. Learning to cope with his new found abilities would be a bit scary, but exilhirating. I'd have fun with that.

Anyway, just one little comment; in future chapters it would be nice if you seperated different paragraphs with a line or something. There's a tool for that, but I believe that it's faulty at the moment, so I usually use (0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0) or something to that extent. I'd make for an easier read. For example: I momentarily through that Lois was called to Perry's office and saw Richard and Clark standing on the rooftop; Richard preparing to jump. Would have been a funny scene, but it's quite impossible.

Well, I'll stop rambling, 'cause I think you get my point.

Keep at it!

Maaike_fluffy

I absolutely love this story! It's so hard to find anything original anymore, but this is one avenue I don't think many will have thought of. Keep up the great work and update asap I can't wait to see what happens!

I'm glad you were able to update. I loved this chapter, and I'm itching to read more. Great work!

This is a good story. I only have one problem:

"His body felt strange, heavy and lumbering as he moved. His arm was heavier than he could ever remember it being."

Richard's body is heavier than Clark/Superman's?

So far, so good. this is going to be hilarious. Although if Smallville is anything to base stuff off of, Clark would know how to drive, but it's funnier that he didn't know how in this case.

This is interesting...I can't wait for the next chappie!

Very nice. Your descriptions are spot on and very expressive. I just hope that you don't actually make Richard Superman and Clark normal, just for the sake of Lois. Bleh. I never got her appeal anyway. Well, I'm off to read the next chapter.

A body-switching story! I haven't seen any like this in the Supes section yet (though I've encountered quite a few in the Harry Potter and Artemis Fowl sections...) It's interesting to see a Richard-Clark body-switch. Can't wait to find out what comes out of this...

I thought it was nice that Richard wanted to be Superman, and Superman wanted to be Richard. Both because of Lois.