poor yue...

but I have to say... Very good, i like the way you write this story...

This coupling always struck me as tragic, for obvious reasons. Haven't read one of these in a while; it's very IC. Yue's my favorite character so I liked his perspective on Clow and your portrayal of him.

*stares* *tear trickles silently down cheek* It's... beautiful...

great one it was cute and i know what you mean playing with Yue's head is fun...lol

Great! Very angsty and introspective! I love your writing style!

freaky, but cool. i like Yue...he's so neato! (did i just type that?...) riiight. verra well written tho! i wish i could write well! sad...

S*N

-MtSoIgwy...

Oooooo... me likeee! please write another like it!

That was beautiful. Please write a sequal, undarkangstytragic or no, i want to read more!

Wow. O.O

YUE!

That fic rocked.

this was sweet... i barely see yue and clow ne more.. its good to be reading sumtin new. well ja ne!

That was so sad, Yet so Yue. He's so cute -. But it's a little OOC because we all know That Clow loved Yue and Keroberos as his sons and he would never hurt Yue (At least not on purpouse)

...wow. That makes my heart ache. x.x Poor Yue. Beautiful piece of work.

Geez, that was heavy stuff. That was really good, bordering on insane. Poor Yue.

*sniff* Oh my. First time a CCS fic makes me burst into tears. Poor Yue, screwing with his head is really great, isn't it? Poor tools of fanfiction... And PLEASE write a good bunch of sequels, undarkangstytragic or not. I'm so thirty for YC fics and Yue fics in general. And thank you for this one, really.