That was awesome. A perfectly constructed short story, only long. Which is really the ultimate story, in my mind. Very nice pacing and tone. All of the important things were said without actually saying them, which was nice, and the end was very powerful, without losing the surreal, "not really part of the rest of the world" feel. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Wonderful. Beautifully written! I love the fact that Celena/Dilandau is so interesting to write because we actually know nothing about her at the end of the series. I love to read different interpretations of her. I am also one of the biggest Dryden fans around so I was pleased as punch to come across such a well written fiction.

Congratulations on a wonderful fiction and I hope to see more.

This is unspeakably fantastic, and just what I was looking for. *Thank* you.

Beautifully written. I adored the way you portrayed the characters. It was brillant.

A beautiful carefully written piece. I thought the attention to the detail made it a bit too lengthy but I still enjoyed it. Love the way you handled Celena and Dryden's characters. You developed them yet kept them to the essence of what I remember from the anime :) Great job

Wow. Just wow. What a unique and unusual story to put out in the web. I never would have imagined such a story - Celena/Dilandau and Dryden? But I see the similiarities once they were mentioned. Great story, wonderfully written, I look forward to more stories from you. :) PEACE!