Well, I thought this would be funny...

It's not funny at all, and every character is OOC. And cutting yourself is a stereotype, and there's no such thing as an emo kid. Emo is a style of music, that's it. You also made a lot of spelling, grammar, and character mistakes.

I think you should know, because you could get more reviews if the story was actually well written and decent.

HA take that gaara and kankuro u both fail shikamu sam ting

shikamaru

hehe, shikamu, kawaii ;)

LOL. very funny.

That was cute and hilarious. Great job.

Lol

That was so cute! She just blurted it ou. *laughs*

What can I say is something else from the story that I have read but I love it, even with Gaara a little bit out of character (I don't see him doing what he did) it was a good story, hope you keep up the good work.

LOL, that was cute, I like it!

lol interesting idea lol

Ah! I knew it! ShikaTema-ness! That was cute! Love her nickname for Shika... Haha... _

Nice oneshot

makes me glad I don't have brothers.

lol! I'm so happy you decided to post this, Brooke! I remember reading the manuscript in the car and almost dying! w

Good Job!

Robyn (Piro-chan)

YAH! So is there more?

super funy! i nearly choked laghing!i would defenitly do THAT to MY sister!