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Artemis Black
2008-05-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw... that's so sweet!

I love Linkin Park too! And I love the song My December, even though it makes me fall alseep if I play it on repeat... Yeah, I'm kind of random.

Nonetheless, that was the sweetest oneshot ever! I'm usually a hardcore yaoi fan that's like, "OMG THERE MUST BE SLASH TO BE A GOOD FANFICTION!", but this is so innocent and sweet that it's perfect! I told my friend about your fanfictions and she was like, "Wow, it's rated T. And this one is rated K+... It's been a while since I've read anything that low rated." But I have to say, what I really like about your writing is that you don't need to put is a whole bunch of lemon to write a good story that gets a whole bunch of reviews, but your writing style and plots are what garner up all your attention and reviews!

Yeah, I'm kind of rambling on and on in a disorganized fashion, but anyways, great job on this fanfiction!
Kalista Jia
2008-03-23
ch 1,
abuseaw that is so cute. Now it reminds me how cute and innocent children are. Not some annoying little "I Want To Strangle Them" kids!
Lyson
2008-02-02
ch 1,
abusehello, is it my december by LP?
Maria-Lilly Kon
2007-08-07
ch 1,
abuseaw that was cute!
WhisperingNights
2006-11-07
ch 1,
abuseAW I realy liked that ^_^
I don't like the sound of Kai's mom tho =[
how dare she be mean about Tala!
*huggles Tala*
bles

^_^
Kirie Hiiwatari
2006-11-05
ch 1,
abuseOMG! That was awesome! Dont make it a one-shot write more! Miss reading your stories!
ChibiLeonKitty
2006-10-25
ch 1,
abuseI have to admit, it isn't what I was expecting. But I have to say, it was well done.
Lady Dusk -Raku-
2006-10-15
ch 1,
abuseAh, cute, that really fit. I love how a simple toy could break the ice between them. Great story.
hoshicat
2006-10-13
ch 1,
abuseomg that was such a cute story! i think that you should do a follow up! like always your writting is tha best and im looking forward to your updates of your other stories!!
Hoshicat ^_^
Kuroneko Hikage
2006-10-01
ch 1,
abuseTala's reaction to the lightaber was comical. Unfortunately, I'm a cliche, obsessed fangirl that is left in awe by your storytelling skills. I didn't see any mistakes, though if there were any I suppose it would be on a higher level of comprehension than my understanding permits. Arigatou, Maxine-sama. Another fine story added to your collection.

You said that this is a stand-alone universe? Kai's parents' behavior intrigues me. Done on a whim, huh? I suck at one-shots. Eh-heh-heh... ^-^; Not that my multi-chaptered stories are any better... Anyway, I'll be awaiting your next update.
Anime18Emo
2006-09-28
ch 1,
abuseNice story! You should make another! Bye.
mikaera
2006-09-17
ch 1,
abusenice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice ! =) love kai, love tala. wanted a kiss TT... but excelent fic anyway. =) nice.
SoulSister
2006-09-17
ch 1,
abuseI actually find My December too depressing to listen to. I think I've listened to it entirely maybe twice, but it certainly served as great inspiration.
I like how simply you started their friendship, kids have it so easy that way. it was a nice change to see Kai as the little spoiled brat and Tala without all his barriers. I really liked this :)
Carrie
2006-09-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery nice. I liked this one-shot.

I like how you decided on a Kai and Tala friendship fic. It's was well written, and the detail of the abbey and such was perfect. Not overdone (not that any of your fics overdo anything XD)

Great job. :) I look forward to reading more of your stories in the near future.

Carrie
Nameless Little Girl
2006-09-16
ch 1,
abuseloved it!
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