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hollydevinlovesdeidera
2008-07-13 . chapter 15
wow! i absolutly love this story! i hope the next chapter will be up soon!
as always,
hollydevin
kyo12591
2008-02-02 . chapter 1
that was interesting ..good job!..later!

kyo amori
bebelurvsbishiess
2008-01-24 . chapter 15
*blink*
Sasuke, you are SUCH an idiot. Not listening to Kakashi's warning and giving yourself a big hole in your chest. This is what happens when you don't listen to your team captain, like you're SUPPOSED to. Honestly, I'm surprised your not dead -__- Usually, I'd side with you, but seeing as this is entirely your fault, I can say nothing to back you up.

Anyways, sorry about your lost ending oh wonderful author!! And yeah, the ending is kinda crappy XD But it's still good, but cheesy nonetheless... Yeah I'll shut up now >.<

P.S. You had a couple typos here. Somewhere in the beginning instead of "revenged" I think it's "avenged". And somewhere during that really long genjutsu I think you wrote Konohana instead of Konoha. But other than that, everything is cool :]
shadowwriter318
2008-01-23 . chapter 15
OMG THIS STORY IS SO FREAKIN ADDICTING! I LUV IT! sry bout hearin ure story gettin slightly erased. that's happened to me b4 AND IT SUX DX anyways awsum job as always =D
bebelurvsbishiess
2008-01-05 . chapter 14
Neh, Sasuke is still a stupid head -__- Thinking that if he leaves that'll stop them from coming, what terrible logic. At least Sakura figured out what he was trying to do and went to find him and tell him that it wouldn't work anyways. Instead, stay there and keep her safe from all of the people that do want to hurt her. Besides, if he left all it would do is just make her die inside, which is basically the same thing as her dying for real...

Anyways, I think it was kinda harsh at the end where he even went as far as to threaten her to make her stay behind, but I guess it's just cause he cares, along with everyone else who thought so too...

Update Soon!! :]
Volere
2007-12-27 . chapter 14
Wow. Hah. I forgot how much I loved this story, but it is amazing nonetheless.
Ah! I'm happy she didn't die, though I have an idea what will happen when they leave with out her... hah
Hm. Its strange. You say we can only take so much of Sasuke-emo-angsting; yet the way you write it, I would ilterally read it forever. :) Yay! Thank you for the quick update!
Thanks again! Great Job!
yours truly,
Uchida
shadowwriter318
2007-12-27 . chapter 14
YAY! NEW CHAPTER YESS! I ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY UNDOUBTLEY LOVE THIS FANFIC! PLEASE UPDATE WENEVER POSSIBLE!
les-liaisons-dangereuses
2007-12-27 . chapter 14
Woah, 12 year olds can be so angsty lol... thanks for updating!
staples
2007-12-27 . chapter 14
this story is super good! :)
please update son :DD
Volere
2007-12-24 . chapter 13
Jeeze, It took you forever to update,
Which made me sad, this was one of my favorite stories, to be honest.
The suspence, I really want to know what happens (hah, if she died, that would be incredibly dramatic.
Please update! Hopefully soon!
yours truly,
Uchida
bebelurvsbishiess
2007-12-15 . chapter 13
I really would love it if you continued this story and go with the ending that you wanted. I've checked on it every single day hoping for a new chapter and I knew that it would pay off. I love the whole concept of the story and the fact that it's Sasuke's POV, it makes me really wish this what he was thinking during this time period. I've stayed with this story for a long time and I've reviewed before also as aziangurl723.

I hope you continue the way you wanted :]
les-liaisons-dangereuses
2007-12-02 . chapter 13
I hope you do continue... I like fics that stick closely to canon before diverging and you do a really good job. However, I can't blame you if you did stop because the recent manga chapters have been truly annoying, with the exception of 380...
shadowriter318
2007-12-02 . chapter 13
OMG OMG OMG OMFG! U HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I LUV THIS STORY! IT IS ONE OF MI MOST FAVORITED AND I ALWAYS LUV TO READ IT! I GOT SO FREAKED THINKING IT WAS OVER! SO WHEB I SAW IT WAS UP I WAS SPAZZING AND WOULDNT TAKE MI EYES OFF TIL I FINISHED! GREAT CHAPTER AS ALWAYS AND U LEAVE ME WITH SUSPENSE! I go with opinion # 1 but do whatever you gotta do GREAT CHAP!
iTravel
2007-12-01 . chapter 13
WOW...this is one of the best stories i have ever read on FF. PLEASE continue and finish the ending like it should be done! Please update soon
TeenageCrisis
2007-12-01 . chapter 13
NO!! you must continue!! you must get the next chap up soon!! ::tear:: you cant do that to us..its cruel..way cruel.. ::snif::
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