Oh! So cute! Goku and Sanzo just fit so well together same with Hakkai and Gojyo... You said something like that in you fic; 'if only it were that easy.' ...right? Or am I going insane? ...either way, I luv this poem and all it represents. =D

I like it. So cute!

Cigarretes and gunsmoke - very apt Sanzo descriptors. Clear and concise. Nice.

I'm not sure how to put my feelings in words. I like it. I really really like it infact. The "I'd cough" part was meaning full. You can really get a sense of how Goku is feeling.

Very Cool, it fits Sanzo perfectly, "Cigarettes and gun smoke,
And beer, Chased tonight by whiskey" It's Sanzo wrapped up in a sentence. Love the ending, in how easy and mundane a sentence it is, but you turned it into something with so much meaning. I don't know if I'm making any sense. Anyway lovely as always.

That was interesting. I'm not much for reading poetry (as I usually can't get it), but this made complete and total sense. I can see Goku thinking about this in some stray moment.