Oh man ! it's great ! the story is absolutely awesome , love it! I want more :)you little Shakespeare ;)

Oh, wow.

I wasn't really sure where you were going in the first few chapters, but now, me really like the direction.

Hope you update soon!

Love this story XD =)

"Why on earth did you list 'dead bodies' and 'human husbandry' as interests?"

I LOVE THAT LINE!
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Claire nodded and grabbed Mac, pulling him into a tight hug. "I hate you so much," she whispered. "Don't - you - dare ever doing stupid things again."

lol i my favorite part. Great chapter i loved it =)

o ** wasnt expecting that! please update soon i so love this story! =) cant wait for more =)

i loved this chapter especially the part from after the dream till the end =)

This looks really good, I can't wait to see where you go with this hopefully it's a happy Mac/Claire story even though it will end sadly. Maybe they could even have a baby.

Wink, wink, hint, hint.

Update soon and keep up the good work.

Fantastic start... please continue... I love to see a bit of back-story with Mac. Sam :)

This is really interesting! I love Mac and Claire fics and I think there should be a whole lot more! Please update soon! I'm anxious to see how you bring it all together!

Great start! Keep it up!