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Nice story!

what rap is he raping? ha ha u spelt rape instead of rapper just so u no

Hey, why didn't you put some rap in. you know like.
I'ma grim rapper, soul stealin homie... etc.
Anyways, funny.
-Caligula.

Awesome-Awesome-UberAwesome! Just, yeah, "raper"...It's rapper.

where's the rape?

Thank you so much for that title. I just...wow. Cannot even begin to describe how hard I laughed after reading it. *thumbs up* Seriously, it made my day.

Heh, in all honesty, though, your story's not half bad. You might wanna ditch the script format and work on adding a little more detail, but all in all, it seems to be coming along nicely.

PS: "Rapper" = A person who raps. "Raper" = ...Not a word, but it bears a hilariously striking resemblance to the word "rapist". Be sure to fix that before you move on to anything else.

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I was promised a rapist, pedophile Grim Reaper, but in the end all I got was a miserable disappointment. That ain't cool, buddy. Well, I guess 'raper' isn't a word anyway, so I shouldn't have expected something like that to happen.

Seriously, I actually liked this story. Liked it in a 'I'm still really ** that Grim didn't rape Billy and Mandy' kind of way.

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I found this to be quit funny to tell you the truth, and I'm not sure why the script format is banned on this site. It don't make no sense (no sir, it don’t). I would like to see more of your work, it's pretty good.

Uh, yes, I would also like to point out that it is 'rapper' and NOT 'raper.' .. -coughcough- Uh, yes.

Anyway, besides the spelling errors, script style and whatnot, it was decently funny. I'd encourage you to keep writing, but just try your best to improve on a lot of stuff. Alright? Alright.

-EndsVille.

I want you to know that a person who raps is called a "rapper," not a "raper." I just -really- thought you should know that, and also that script style stories aren't allowed. I won't report you, but there are other people who will.