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Reviews for: A Moment in Time
Fionn the Otaku
2007-12-12 . chapter 1
A very nice, Very sad and very beautiful story that introduces a interesting new mutant character. She reminds me a little bit of Jono/Chamber in that she dosen't/can't talk but communicates via telepathy.
arsh1910
2007-04-16 . chapter 1
hey gr88 fic...it ws awesum!!
Tezza1502
2006-09-20 . chapter 1
That was a very bittersweet, slice-of-life one-shot. I enjoyed it. Can't wait to see where you go next. T
-Secret Philosopher-
2006-09-18 . chapter 1
Pretty good!

I liked it!

kinda philosophical and all that!!

kinda like what i write:)

Nice
DOGO
aka
-SP-
CaptainTish
2006-09-15 . chapter 1
Wow.

That was awesome. So well-written (I kind of like the short paragraphs) and so moving. Mary Jo is definitely a good character -- you really must do more with her! And the funky spelling of her mutant name Psylence might seem cliched at first until you realise -- the P is "silent"! :) Clever!

Seriously, I really hope to see more stories about this character in the future! Good job!
Shorty McGee
2006-09-14 . chapter 1
I really like this one. It really gets to a person and makes you think.

Keep Writing, Shorty McGee
Snickle-Gigger
2006-09-14 . chapter 1
...

Damn you for making me experience human sentiments.

*sulks*

Very well written, however, and I just...liked it in general. :) Now please excuse me while I run to the store so I can buy a box of tissues...
GothikStrawberry
2006-09-14 . chapter 1
Oh, God ... that was so incredibly sad *tears-up* ... but is also wonderfully written. I loved it! :)
Brimseye
2006-09-13 . chapter 1
T_T *sniff* so..so..sad! but it was a good story! I liked it and if you come up with any thing else about her i for one would love to read about it! :D
The Bud
2006-09-13 . chapter 1
By mentally blind, do you mean those who are too stupid to read their own thoughts? I don't mess with boys because that would be wrong on so many levels. Yer ol' pal, The Bud.
MeadowLark4491
2006-09-13 . chapter 1
...Wow...*swallows* that was really good. It was amazing.
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