 Fionn the Otaku 2007-12-12 . chapter 1A very nice, Very sad and very beautiful story that introduces a interesting new mutant character. She reminds me a little bit of Jono/Chamber in that she dosen't/can't talk but communicates via telepathy. |
 arsh1910 2007-04-16 . chapter 1hey gr88 fic...it ws awesum!! |
 Tezza1502 2006-09-20 . chapter 1That was a very bittersweet, slice-of-life one-shot. I enjoyed it. Can't wait to see where you go next. T |
 -Secret Philosopher- 2006-09-18 . chapter 1Pretty good!
I liked it!
kinda philosophical and all that!!
kinda like what i write:)
Nice
DOGO
aka
-SP- |
 CaptainTish 2006-09-15 . chapter 1Wow.
That was awesome. So well-written (I kind of like the short paragraphs) and so moving. Mary Jo is definitely a good character -- you really must do more with her! And the funky spelling of her mutant name Psylence might seem cliched at first until you realise -- the P is "silent"! :) Clever!
Seriously, I really hope to see more stories about this character in the future! Good job! |
 Shorty McGee 2006-09-14 . chapter 1I really like this one. It really gets to a person and makes you think.
Keep Writing, Shorty McGee |
 Snickle-Gigger 2006-09-14 . chapter 1...
Damn you for making me experience human sentiments.
*sulks*
Very well written, however, and I just...liked it in general. :) Now please excuse me while I run to the store so I can buy a box of tissues... |
 GothikStrawberry 2006-09-14 . chapter 1Oh, God ... that was so incredibly sad *tears-up* ... but is also wonderfully written. I loved it! :) |
 Brimseye 2006-09-13 . chapter 1T_T *sniff* so..so..sad! but it was a good story! I liked it and if you come up with any thing else about her i for one would love to read about it! :D |
 The Bud 2006-09-13 . chapter 1 By mentally blind, do you mean those who are too stupid to read their own thoughts? I don't mess with boys because that would be wrong on so many levels. Yer ol' pal, The Bud. |
 MeadowLark4491 2006-09-13 . chapter 1...Wow...*swallows* that was really good. It was amazing. |