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Scipio'sgirl
2008-01-31
ch 27,
abuseAren't you proud of me I read this in one day to. Now write the next on or else :P I think my two favorite parts are when the Firey is taking out her hair and trying to put it back and when Jareth Yelled at her for dying on him. Love-Scipio'sgirl
sesshys-flame-of-faith
2007-12-03
ch 9,
abuseHey, Keep up the good writing! Great story I love The Show!
aeenc
2007-01-14
ch 27,
abuseNice story, something different from most of what I've read. Although I bet all those Sarah haters were so happy that she was dying and then hated you for letting her die and live happily with Jareth. *hehe*
NoelCarol
2006-12-15
ch 27,
abuseWow...I just read the whole story today, and it was so good! I'm not personally into all that dark, depressing, sad stuff (I know, I'm so articulate. Lol.) It's just not my style or personality. But you've got so much emotion in your writing, I couldn't stop reading even in the parts that were hard to get through. I've never read a story on FanFiction before that has made me cry. (The Toby-Hospital scene-of course). And I've read hundreds of stories on FF.
Anyway, just wanted to say that it was a really good story, and very well written. :)
crystal13moon
2006-12-08
ch 27,
abuseYay, no more sadness! Such a happy ending. Great job!
crystal13moon
2006-12-08
ch 26,
abuseSo sad, it's always sad, but so good.
notwritten
2006-12-07
ch 27,
abusegood ending
excellent
FemmeLoki
2006-12-07
ch 27,
abuse*bliss*
Yay!

Good story. :) Enjoyed it!
saz89
2006-12-07
ch 27,
abuseIt just got better an better - will def be looking out for other phics you write :o) !
Keep it up - you def have talent!

Brill way to end - hope !

Saz
FemmeLoki
2006-12-05
ch 26,
abuse*sniffle* :(
notwritten
2006-12-05
ch 26,
abusesad
good
FemmeLoki
2006-12-01
ch 25,
abuse... o_O
*falls out of chair*
*speechless*
FemmeLoki
2006-12-01
ch 24,
abuseAh, I knew she couldn't die. *stomps on part that was worried*
crystal13moon
2006-12-01
ch 25,
abuseThis is so sad. Update soon please!
crystal13moon
2006-12-01
ch 24,
abuseSad, it's so sad. But it's great!
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