I've spent long days and nights reading this.
When I saw the 113 chapters, I said to myself, "How can I finish reading all this!?"
But I did.
And now, I must say that this story is beautiful, breathtaking, stunning, the best OC fanfiction I've read to this day.
I look forward to the next chapter. :)
~atemfan1

Olan doesn't have any idea of what he's getting himself into if he didn't make a remark of Edward first before the Flame. :P Can't wait till the next chapter.

wow.
this story is one of the best io have ever read. i just recently got into anime and manga, and i only watched FMA a few weeks ago. a friend of mine recommended me to read your story, so i did. she told me as far as she was concerned, this is how the story continues and goes on. i am amazed at how well you stayed true the orginal character, but still had them mature, and develope. i absolutely love gabbie and anna, and i love how they both find ed and al. and i cannot wait unil the whole story is finished. i read the whole 113 chapters twice during this five day break i have right now from school. i actually shivered in parts, and my mom laughed at me. anyways, i really look forward to the rest, and i hope you continue to write, because you are seriously amazing at it. thank you for giving a lot of people an amzing stpry to read, and i look forward to more! ^-^

this has to be the best oc story i have ever read. pleasee update soon!

lol the pasty alchemist,the wrench wielding alchemist, and the lily alchemist hehe that a good one.^_^

Everybody likes to brag once in a while and Roy could indeed use the advice. Another stunning chapter as always.

Olan makes me suspicious...probably for good reason. I thought the phone conversation bit was really cute though, I heart Al. Lovely update, I'm now very excited to see how everything fits together for this current story arc!

Yo~! Meiyo here (yes, I've changed my nickname again and yes I've created a new account, hence the new subscription and adding to favourites :D)!

I really want to try out the running an electric current through metal thing :) It reminds me of a mood ring but then not as lame but a thousand times better!

(bear with me for the next part is really just an internal dialogue)

Olan confuses me sometimes! When he first appeared he had me thinking he might get it on with Winry, but in this chapter he somehow seems to fancy Anna's pants off, but then again, that's probably only because of his interest in her, Gabbie, and the government. And then there's the fact that Anna's practically engaged (!!) and she and Alphonse make a perfect couple-so why am I even thinking of an Anna/Olan relationship? It's not possible. Would be cute, but not possible. For many reasons. It's just because I love Olan so much; he's bloody brilliant! Can't wait for some Olan/Winry interaction :P (if there will ever be any romantic interaction between them).

GKs~!

Yeah she should tell Mustang, he needs it. By the way any news on the baby front? I haven't had the time lately to check if it's on the form just tell me and I'll be happy with that, then you don't have to repeat it.

The one and only strangeness.

Hm...I don't think agreeing to that deal was a very good idea, Anna. You should have waited to talk to Gabbie first...I don't trust Olan. He's just...suspicious. ^^;

Wonderful chapter, as always; no spelling mistakes that I can see and again drawing me in with subtle hints. ^^

Well, I hope you're happy. I just stayed up all night, reading 82 chapters so I could catch up on your ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC STORY! ^_^ I actually found this ages ago, but with real life and very sporadic internet access, I hadn't been able to get past 30. Aside from a few spelling errors, (and I assure you that it's not the nitpicky color/colour thing) this is very well-written, with believable characters, and beautifully depicted emotional scenes. I've giggled, gotten chills, and became teary-eyed throughout the story. You should be very proud.

Great chapter! Update soon!~

*bakes more cookies*
cool chapter
go gabbie taking charge

That was scary of Ed! I would be put off and insulted for a second, because that was definitely a 180 degree turn of personality. Is he bipolar? xD Nice Gabbie and Ed moments in there, I definitely find Ed too arrogant for his own good (and you don't even get the opportunity to prove him wrong - it's that exasperating) and Al is as much a sweetheart as he ever was. I'm looking forward to whenever your next updates are.

By the way, how long is this supposed to pan out? I'm wondering if there's any more action :) So, thanks for this update!

I feel sorry for the recruts. Sad little people. I personally wouldn't have signed up for the military, but I suppose that people want to do that.If I were in Gabbriella's shoes, I'd be quaking. Ed's cool and all but he scares me when he's mad and he's not even in the room with me!
It's a nice chapter and I'm kind of enjoying the fact that in a small way, Roy just got his favorite toy taken away from him. I pity that nurse though.