Brillo,
I almost died of laughter at chappy 3
I mean I can actually imagine tht. Great humor there.
More? If so can't wait

There are a lot of run-ons, and you used Aeris (FFVII) instead of Aerith (KH), but other than that, great story.

That is one beautiful opening chapter. The discriptions were lovely, and I think that is what Aeris would look like on her wedding day. One thing though, you moved from present tense back to past tense a few times in the second paragraph. Just give it a read over.

Anyway, I am enjoying this so far!

LastCetra

And on to the honeymoon!

is this over? it's amazing!

LOL, Cid is always able to make me laugh.

LOL! Loved the Sora and Leon acting of Cloud and Aerith. Very amusing

Aww... so sweet and hahahaha qoute 'untie him from a tree' that's a good one :D .
Keep it up and good work.
By the way Enima from the CloudxAerith forums here and nice to meet you *hug* .

Hey great job so far! I am really enjoying this and I am sure that everyone else who reads it will too! I think that spacing out the paragraphs is a great idea. It makes it easier to read. Oh and another thing just make sure you go over each chapter and fix the itty bitty mistakes other, than that the chapters were very wel writen. Nice description too. Just a little suggestion... if you want to you could put a few really good lines from the next chapter in each previous one. That way if the lines are really hooking you will have alot of people waiting to find out what happens. This is just a suggestion. It is probably what I will do for the next chapter of my story. Anyway great job and update soon!

Cloud and Aerith are just too cute. Don't forget to update so we can witness their oh so lovely wedding! Keep it going, aerisbolt.

I like this sotry, it would be even better if you could space out your paragraphs, it's a little hard to read sometimes. ^^
Aside from that and grammar mistakes, good job!
Update soon!