Please come back! I just love this story and would love to see more. Please?

wow!
this is so cool!
update soon!

This was an interesting little twist. Now, not only does Harry have a wand that three of the Founders created for the specific use to defeat Slytherin, Harry's wand now has the feather from Fawkes.

I wonder... Is Fawkes actually Merlin, like he was in Harry Potter and the Guardians of Power? If he is, it would makes sense why the feather would cause that pulse.

I seriously hope that you are healed from all of your troubles and ills. Feel better. (And when you have time to update, we'll be waiting for you.)

Sincerely,
Miriam

Hello

I read your story and I enjoy! This is a good idea and with a good script and credible sitatuions (in a magic world!)
I hope you sucess to finisth your writing despite your heath problems
Sorry if may review is a little "light" but english is not may language and I fear write with mistakes if I write a more complicate text

I hope read you before long
Dina

I like the story so far except I really hope Harry and Ginny don't end up together from the little bit you said about how Harry thought Ginny was ok.

wow, i really got emotional in this chapter... this is the first fanfic that actually makes me cry!

I really like a lot of this story and I think you have a lot of writing talent, but some of the themes made me a bit uncomfortable and I do wish you'd warned at the beginning you were going to introduce the two OFCs and have Sirius marry one. Also, Marybeth is a really weirdly American sort of name- are you planning on addressing it?

I really like a lot of aspects of this story but some of them I find a little disturbing, like the pranks on Snape. I just feel so sorry for him the constant humilation must be just horrible. It just...it just feels rather bullying to my mind, but then perhaps I'm just going by my own experiences- if someone did half of the things like that to me I'd be a snivelling mess and desperate to leave.

I am so sorry to hear about your daughter.

in the fifth line, Petunia Durseys says an american word. Did JKR tell in an interview she wasn't English its just i assumed she was.

This whole story is very thorough and marvelous. I eagerly await further chapters, and hope that you have better luck in the future.

-VS

can't wait to read more!!

are you going to keep up with the story,cuz its interestingly good an i cant wait to read more.

this is a great story, i cant wait to see what happens next

While you start your story with a very promising and interesting plot, after Harry's whole "Gryffindor/Ravenclaw heir" and the, sorry for saying this, stupid idea of getting Sirius a Muggle nurse as a WIFE with a CHILD Harry's age who sudenly shows magical abilities, it went downhill. It's good to see Harry justified, but in the last chapters (until 16 that is) you focus on Sirius and his relationship, which is also totally pointless. Harry losing his heritage? Come on, that's... bad. Sirius wouldn't do that. And Marybeth is boring. Glynnis just a Mary Sue, where did you get the name anyway? I dunno, it seems as though there's a lot of development without the characters being ready for it...

Again, sorry if I offended you in any way, that was not my purpose, just to tell you it would have been a great idea if there was no Glynnis/Marybeth in the plot. And less powerful Harry, it takes the excitement of seeing the outcome of the battles away.