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starophie
2009-11-16 . chapter 4
I'm going to keep reading, but I just wanted to inform you that I had the same sort of childhood...I was reading Easy Reader chapter books by two and a half and I've always been in accelerated programs, so I know exactly what you mean when you talk about Harry. My favorite part so far is his calligraphy! So BAMF!
Claddagh
2009-11-03 . chapter 24
Please come back! I just love this story and would love to see more. Please?
weatherwitch.X.x.X.
2009-11-03 . chapter 24
wow!
this is so cool!
update soon!
Miriam1
2009-11-02 . chapter 24
This was an interesting little twist. Now, not only does Harry have a wand that three of the Founders created for the specific use to defeat Slytherin, Harry's wand now has the feather from Fawkes.

I wonder... Is Fawkes actually Merlin, like he was in Harry Potter and the Guardians of Power? If he is, it would makes sense why the feather would cause that pulse.

I seriously hope that you are healed from all of your troubles and ills. Feel better. (And when you have time to update, we'll be waiting for you.)

Sincerely,
Miriam
clodina
2009-10-25 . chapter 24
Hello

I read your story and I enjoy! This is a good idea and with a good script and credible sitatuions (in a magic world!)
I hope you sucess to finisth your writing despite your heath problems
Sorry if may review is a little "light" but english is not may language and I fear write with mistakes if I write a more complicate text

I hope read you before long
Dina
sfgiants674
2009-10-21 . chapter 11
I like the story so far except I really hope Harry and Ginny don't end up together from the little bit you said about how Harry thought Ginny was ok.
Maxmoquito
2009-10-21 . chapter 3
wow, i really got emotional in this chapter... this is the first fanfic that actually makes me cry!
Fred Altair
2009-10-18 . chapter 14
I really like a lot of this story and I think you have a lot of writing talent, but some of the themes made me a bit uncomfortable and I do wish you'd warned at the beginning you were going to introduce the two OFCs and have Sirius marry one. Also, Marybeth is a really weirdly American sort of name- are you planning on addressing it?
Owlian
2009-10-18 . chapter 12
I really like a lot of aspects of this story but some of them I find a little disturbing, like the pranks on Snape. I just feel so sorry for him the constant humilation must be just horrible. It just...it just feels rather bullying to my mind, but then perhaps I'm just going by my own experiences- if someone did half of the things like that to me I'd be a snivelling mess and desperate to leave.
leona-the-critic
2009-10-15 . chapter 5
I am so sorry to hear about your daughter.
writer1066
2009-10-14 . chapter 1
in the fifth line, Petunia Durseys says an american word. Did JKR tell in an interview she wasn't English its just i assumed she was.
Veiled Sapphire
2009-10-12 . chapter 24
This whole story is very thorough and marvelous. I eagerly await further chapters, and hope that you have better luck in the future.

-VS
How does he do it
2009-10-11 . chapter 17
can't wait to read more!!
megclem84@gmail.com
2009-09-21 . chapter 24
are you going to keep up with the story,cuz its interestingly good an i cant wait to read more.
loretta537
2009-09-15 . chapter 24
this is a great story, i cant wait to see what happens next
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