well, the summary said you wanted criticism so...

FLAME FLAME FLAME FLAME FLAME!

...just kidding.

But this did distort some of the characters a bit. It does have some elements of reality (after all, Red is a girl).

But all I have to say about the ending is...what? Forgive my naivete, but I really do not understand what is going on there. Is Perrault the one who is onvolved in that...scene with Red? Why?

Anyway, I like that you tried.