 Irindiglo 2008-10-09 . chapter 3Epic lol! Haha that was hilarious! |
 T'wasYesterdayT'isUltimately 2008-10-09 . chapter 2Oh I get it!
I thought:
Kerry=Bridget
Rory=Jim
Cate=Rory
CJ=Cate
Bridget=Kerry
Jim=CJ
when it's really:
Kerry=Bridget
Rory=Jim
Cate=CJ
CJ=Cate
Kerry=Bridget
Jim=Rory
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Rory, Cate, CJ, and Jim did not do a four way switch but rather CJ & Cate switched while Jim & Rory switched. And in this one, Kerry & Bridget switched. Nice job! Hilarious! |
 Irindiglo 2008-10-09 . chapter 2LoL! Haha! THat's awesome! So funny! Like how you introduced the switch with character's dialogue! The switches are hilarious! Oh my, who did Rory and CJ become, lol? |
 Irindiglo 2008-10-09 . chapter 1Lol, awesome! Though a little more detail instead of the 'they all gave out bad judgments' would help. Stories are more detailed and fun to read but the script is faster and more fun here! |
 Freebird87 2008-03-08 . chapter 3That was so funny. |
 Freebird87 2008-03-08 . chapter 2That was so funny. Rory calling himself an old man. CJ calling himself a single mother. |
 1treehillcharmed 2007-08-27 . chapter 3hm.. a little confusing, and why are they going to school on a saturday? |
 Mysticstar 2007-03-01 . chapter 1Lol xD This eposode was hilarous, hope your story'll be too!
I don't really like dialogue much for several reasons, but I'll put up with it for your story...
.::Mysticstar::. |
 Jess88 2006-11-11 . chapter 3great story! |
 charmed4eva112 2006-11-05 . chapter 1Hey! Great story. I was wondering, which Titanic? It had to have been the old one because the newest one wasn't made until 1997. Grea story. |
 ImperialGoddess-123 2006-11-04 . chapter 3i like ur plot, but wasn't it Friday night the day before?I'm a bit confused... lolz, update soon |
 Grace's Star 2006-09-28 . chapter 1Why do you write in script format? I am just intereste because one of the ways to engage the reader is by creating atmosphere which is something missing when a story is written this way. The basis of a great story is there but i think you need to find new ways of presenting the stories, well in my opinion. |
 ilove8simplerulesgrl 2006-09-17 . chapter 3please update it was getting interesting |
 BlueMoonDestiny 2006-09-14 . chapter 3Great chapter. Please update soon.:) |
 BlueMoonDestiny 2006-09-13 . chapter 1Great chapter. I wonder what happens next, please update soon. :) |