AW ! SO CUTE !

Aww, that was so sweet. Anyone who flames cute fluff needs to burn!

awesome story!

Aw . . . that was so cute. The random Pokemon song was pretty cool ;p. This hunt for brotherly fluff stories is going well. I don't watch this show, but it was soo kawai, so good job.

that was such a great story very sweet i fell in love with it emidiatly plaese write more I LOVE IT!

This is a very sweet story. I loved it.

I'm going to offer some advice though...Well I guess you could consider it advice ^^; Don't take this as a flame...Believe me, you would know if this was a flame because I'd be going on and on about how bad the story was (which it's not bad at all)

Anyways, one just a warning that with the new rules in place, you cannot have song lyrics in a story. I wouldn't worry much about it though, I highly doubt someone is going to waste their time reporting you when there are a lot of stories out there with song lyrics in them.

And second, I can't really see Zane being nice to Syrus like that. I think it's just me though. I've never been able to picture him nice to his brother, unless they were really little and Zane wasn't at duel academy yet. But still, it was a really good story. I absolutly loved it.

You should do more stories with Syrus and Zane. This one was good, I'm sure your others would be good as well :)

A very lovely look at Zane and Syrus. You did a wonderful job, I really enjoyed reading this.

AWW! That was so sweet! I love these kinds of cutesy little stories. *faves right away*

(takes a deep breath) AW(BREAKS FOR ANOTHER BREATH)W
W... how cute

you get the idea
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Love Fay

1. Nice choice in songs. I like Pokemon.

2. This is going to my favorites, despite my brother may see it there and tell everyone about it but it hasn't stopped me from having a favorites quite yet.

3. Nice fluff. I quite like it and hope it doesn't get flamed.

4. I don't like the review the person before me wrote. Lyrics may be banned, but screw the rules! My brother made an obnoscious story that had spelling mistakes, character names spelled wrong, in illigal script format. It hasn't even been deleted even though so many people have reported it.

5. (Hey, I counted to five!) Nice setting. Thunder storm during summer, afraid little brother and a caring big brother.

I hope to read more GX stories of yours if you come out with any more.

Till then, Peace out,

Gash.

The story was adorable, just one thing, lyrics in fanfictions are banned, just to let you know. I loved it though.