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Callista MacLeod 7/22/10 . chapter 4
"I CAN CONQUER THAT BROKEN ANKLE, PRINCESS!" The conquest stone said.

Ahahaha! The Stone of Conquest cracks me up. And the fact that it speaks in ALLCAPS makes me think of a cheesy-macho superhero voice.

That, or Christian Bale doing his "I'M BATMAN!" voice.

Anyhew. Methinks the Stone of Conquest will be going a bit trigger-happy for a while. And I wanted to say that I really enjoy your Aladdin fanfiction. It's well-written, and the length and storyline is like watching an episode of the cartoon series. Also, the characters seem to be...well, in-character, an often-neglected point. Especially Genie. Genie delights me.
Bo's Rival 3/28/07 . chapter 4
Loved the story! I especially like how they conjure up a way to make it look like Aladdin's "Ghost" is haunting Mechaniclies. (Plus, SADIRA IS MY FAVORITE CHARACTER FROM THE TELEVISION SHOW!) I think there should be more Sadira stories on the site because she's so interesting. She's sassy, streetwise, and a sorceress-in-training. You can't ask for a better street rat (Besides Aladdin, of course.) Thanks for the story!
Rebecca 3/11/06 . chapter 4
Great story Keep up the great work. Funny.
VampireNaomi 1/23/06 . chapter 4
I know this is an old story, but I just couldn't resist reviewing now that I found it here. I first read it on your site and loved every minute of the experience. You have a fabulous sense of humour that suits the series' spirit perfectly. Reading this was like wathching some of the episodes. The plot was funny and interesting and managed to be exciting without being overly angsty or dramatic, like some other Aladdin stories.

I also adore the way you wrote Mechanikles. There aren't too many stories that feature him, so this one was a true gem. You're going to my favourites entirely because of this.
anon 2/2/05 . chapter 1
"We can figure that our for ourselves, THANKS,"

Typo?

He pulled a picklock from his collection and seconds later, the lock clicked.

Lockpick, not picklock.

The frying pan intercepted the fireball, whereupon Genie used his butcher knife, meat cleaver - and several other hands armed with such cooking utensils as a whisk, a spatula, a jackhammer, and an outboard motor - sliced, diced, chopped, whipped, blended, filleted, and pureed the fireball with a delicious blend of black pepper, green pepper, red pepper, cayenne pepper, chili pepper, bell peppers, jalepeno peppers, Dr. Pepper and Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Heart Club Band into a tasty sauce and fired it back at Mekhanikles.

Fabulous. Absolutely fabulous. That was creative, funny, and true to the show. Fabulous.

"This wimpy ghost wouldn't scare my Aunt Petunia!"

Aunt Petunia. Funny...

"Oopsie," indeed. Funny...(chapter 2)

Anyway, I loved this story. It was great. I especially liked the food fight. That was spectacular. This was altogether a fantastic story.
Tar Irene 1/23/05 . chapter 4
Heehee - again, brilliant! Really funny, witty, and entertaining. This has definitely satisfied my craving for more Aladdin episodes. (For now.)

I really liked this, especially the touch about Sadira liking Mekhanikles - I'm all against bad guys being reformed, but they would make a pretty cute (if weird) couple.
Paul P.S. Sullivan 11/24/04 . chapter 1
I adore your work. I can see your stories being animated.
NeitherSparky 8/5/04 . chapter 4
I loved it! I'm gonna make a t-shirt that says "Goat Milk?"

I really liked the characters of the Conquest Stone and the Mirror Genie. I wonder what happened to them? (Maybe they pop up in some of your other fic, I haven't checked yet.) I loved your Mek, he's one of my favorite Aladdin characters and I'm sure I never could have written him so well. I wonder if Sadira's comment about liking him if he weren't a villain made him reconsider his life at all. :)
The Original Marisa 4/9/04 . chapter 4
...I've only read three, and yet I love your stories to no end. _
Keep writing. *thumbs up*
ShadowHawk 9/15/03 . chapter 4
great fic, only 1 problam The villain's name is Spelled Mechanicles
Nightw2 9/7/02 . chapter 4
I'm only sorry that I waited THIS long to review such a superb story. You really DO have a superb gift for writing this stuff. Bravo.
Lazey 8/26/02 . chapter 4
ROFL

I loved it. Only disagreement I can think of is that Mec wouldn't likely leave a mangled body of Aladdin behind amongst the debris. So messy.

LOL
Calluna 1/30/02 . chapter 1
I take it back; *this* one is my favorite. ;)
Duck Soup 11/13/01 . chapter 1
funny!
Tweed 7/16/01 . chapter 4
Hey! Something with Mekhanikles in it! And well written and enjoyable to boot! You're my hero.
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