I can't believe it. Stumbling upon this story and reading only to come to the conclusion you're the writer from Harem Nights. A favourite fanfic of mine and my first Mummy fic!

And I like where this story is going, it's refreshing after all the Mummy fanfics I've read. I like the dialogue and I even like all the background information ;)

But... I want to find out what happens next...will you update? I hope so, even though you haven't updated in a while...I'll just put this story on my story alert and pray for an update!

cool.
like how you twisted the murder around to make a completely diiferent story.

Hey, I'm enjoying your story :-) I think the characters are well written and I can't wait to read what happens next :-)

Perfection.

You really do have the Rick/Evy banter down to a science and I like the fact that he has not given up his legionare days, clever twist.

I also enjoy Evy and Alex... and of course Raoul, who appears in my head in the form of a oily pool boy wearing nothing but a thong.

However, I know this is not the case.

Anyway, I enjoy this, a lot and I'm going to keep reading now.

*clears throat*

Hey, um... remember me? Lozza? Neffie? Your faithful fan-fiction counterpart and sidekick. Well... I just received an e-mail alert that you'd updated your story and well, I had no idea of this! Since I should be studying for Latin I will proceed with the rest of these chapters since I am, in fact, intrigued. Missed you!

... thats a really nasty cliffhanger.. :)

*story added to story alert list*

I like it. You seem to have the characters in perspective. I could actually see them saying what you write. Keep going!

This deserves far more reviews!! Sorry I'm late, this is so wonderful! I am loving every minute of it! The storyline is great, and the adorable fluff between Rick and Evy is amazing! All I can say is MORE PLEASE!

This is really an excellent story! Your detail is incredible, and I can't wait to find out what happens next!

This was another great chapter, Alex certainly is a bright boy! I loved the way you described the close loving relationship between Rick and Evy and the way you stayed true to the characters from the movie. Excellent, I look forward to reading more!

This was fantastic! You described it all so well, I could see in my minds eye how it looked when Seti died and also after they had ruined the tomb. I really hope you decide to post more as I would love to read it. This is a brilliant start, and looks as if the story is gonna be absolutely gripping! So until you add more! Cheerio!

Oh yes. Very, VERY good. You've done a marvelous job here with imagery, and I absolutely love the way you've used the back-and-forth-in-time thing...

How very sad. Of course I'd be interested to see Seti's corpse in a museum, but only as a memento of history...I never really thought of "it" as a person, as SOMEONE...you know what I mean? I suppose a body is not a person, but still...

Very poignant and well-thought-out. I truly look forward to more.

Ciao!

Ivy :)