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NotBob
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
I have read this story three times. I just love it so much. I look foward to reading the rest of your work! ^_^
mannd1068
2009-10-30 . chapter 20
Excellent story, can't wait for you to complete the sequel!
mannd1068
2009-10-27 . chapter 7
I liked this chapter, but my question to make everyone go hm is if Voldemort was Harry's buggart, how would anyone in the class know except Lupin? After all no one knows what he looks like right? They would have been one or so when he disappeared.
bloocheeze
2009-10-26 . chapter 20
Probably one of the best Harry Potter/Naruto crossovers I have ever stumbled upon. But before I get into that...

You already had this beta-ed correct? I assume that either your beta was extremely lazy or their editing skills aren't very good. I found tons of punctuation and spelling errors and incoherent sentences littered throughout the story, so I recommend getting another beta (one whose strengths are affiliated with more practical things, such as grammar, spelling, etc) to edit this.

Other than those flaws, I found this story to be immensely interesting. I love how you developed Itachi's character and intertwined his problems with his family with the wizarding world. Your story-telling skills, while not the best, kept me reading even though I'm usually not into Itachi-centric fics.

I'll be sure to read your sequel. :)
Jisatsu Keikou and Yoru Kurai
2009-10-26 . chapter 15
i like the plot twist, having Shisui do it instead of itachi. and despite this being written before his true motives were revealed, its still pretty accurate, at least when it comes to him not wanting to kill sasuke :)
Neko4
2009-10-18 . chapter 20
okay i read the story and i know that sasuke is alive
so what happen in that story professor uchiha when it comes down to sasuke
what going to happen next in Professor Uchiha
elric0sis
2009-10-17 . chapter 20
three words, Best. Crossover. Ever. Totally awesome story!
Daughter of ether
2009-10-12 . chapter 2
Just a spot on your dictionary in this chapter.

Itachi doesnt speak english but he knows what apples are. Rather than a definition of apple an english - japanese dictionary should have sometihng like

‘Apple; ap·ple ápp’l (plural ap·ples) りんご,林檎Ri.n.go'

~ja ne
GraceFangsandFire
2009-10-07 . chapter 16
HAH!
Kakashi is pure awesome in that scene with the scroll!
cz
2009-10-02 . chapter 20
i luv ur story! finish the sequel soon!
Deidara da Kitsune
2009-09-21 . chapter 20
This is an absolutely fantasmical story!! (My own word; if you wanna know, it means fantastic/magical) Wow... that was a pun.. kinda.

Anyway, awesome story!! Loved it, loved it, loved it!!

I won't read Professor Uchiha until it's done... so if you had extra space or something, can you write 'complete' at the end of the summary? Please?

Can't wait until it's finished, and I'll drop a review at the end of that too!

-DdK
Lvmj
2009-09-15 . chapter 20
Very well written, a good plot, and lots of creativity sown into the words.

-Lvmj
Xxwolfy-chanxX
2009-09-14 . chapter 2
i really like that itachi didn't meet the trio yet or any griffs most of the time the new kid always meets them in stories...really original didn't expect it
darkemoperson
2009-09-12 . chapter 20
I LOVE YOU Mistress DragonFlame! I FREAKING LOVE YOU! THE STORY IS WAY AWESOME!
Loatroll
2009-09-09 . chapter 20
Great work! Finally someone taking care of business on that night (with Werewolf Lupin and so on) :-)

And Professor Uchiha?! :D:D:D:D Hahaha that amuses me to no end. Really enjoyable read, and I'm really looking forward to reading more from you.
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