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| bluesweetie1978 2007-06-02 ch 9, | abusereally great story |
| Hairspray07fan 2007-05-27 ch 9, | abuseplease write more i loved it all. |
| Girlz-Rule 2007-05-19 ch 9, | abusegreat story:) |
| xodamhsoirxo 2007-01-01 ch 8, | abuseDarry's just so darn sweet to Pony :) Pony and Soda wouldn't be mad I don't think. Soda is so understanding and Pony, well he's just so believing and innocent in this story I wouldn't think he'd mind. Please update quicker than last time, I love this so much. |
| yaoinut 2006-12-25 ch 7, | abuseAWESOME chapter but that was mean what you did to Darry. How can you break his heart like that? I hope Darry and Dally work out their problems. Can't wait till the next chapter. |
| Shadows Run 2006-12-24 ch 7, | abusePor Darry and Dally. I like that you're considering all the aspects of the trouble they'd have and I think it's funny the teacher would flirt with Darry hehe. |
| xodamhsoirxo 2006-12-23 ch 7, anon. | abuseIt tears me apart with the whole adopting thing- that sounds so corny but it's true. I sit here and I like don't blink because I feel like I'm going to cry if I do. I love it though, keep it up. |
| xodamhsoirxo 2006-12-13 ch 6, anon. | abuseSo much drama, I'm thinking about this that and everything at the same time. I like it that way though, this story is great. Happy holidays to you too! :D |
| Shadows Run 2006-12-12 ch 6, | abuseAw Darry ish being all fatherly. I liked the short love scene. Could be longer but then again, I'm a fan of the slash. Good chappie. |
| pyro joe 2006-12-05 ch 5, anon. | abusecute |
| Shadows Run 2006-12-01 ch 5, | abuseAw Darry's starting to pull himself together. Heh, Dally would wanna beat Steve up. I really like the dynamics in the relationships you have going. Awesome job. |
| Shadows Run 2006-12-01 ch 4, | abuseAw sick Pony is cute. And all the boys trying to be a mom type nurse. The last part is sad. The Dally Darry scene is awesome without being too explicit and I think Dally would normally like it a little rougher, heh. Another awesome chapter. |
| Shadows Run 2006-12-01 ch 3, | abuseGawd, she gets worse every chapter. I can't wait to see the relationship develope between Darry and Dally and I think the nick names are uber cute, in a manly way. I'm glad they're all together again. |
| Shadows Run 2006-12-01 ch 2, | abuseAw poor Soda, but good for him to protect his brother... What a **! Crazy woman! Sorry I haven't read in so long, but this is awesome. I can't wait til they're all together again... |
| xodamhsoirxo 2006-11-28 ch 5, | abuseI love this story.I don't really like slash but you make a plot behind it. An actual story. I've told soda'slover the same thing before. Seeing Pony so scared and little really gets to me, don't worry it's in a good way. Darry too, I like him not being the oldest. I think that's a big part of why I like this so much, the different ages. I like seeing them younger rather than 25 years later and all that jazz. This is a wicked good story and I hope you update soon :) |