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Niana Kuonji
2009-10-28 . chapter 31
I stayed up until 3:30 in the morning to finish this, you sneaky, brilliant author you. Congratz and I'll be back when you get around to updating, yeah?
Legendary Chimera
2009-10-09 . chapter 4
“You can propose later. We’ve got work to do.” Hahahaha! I think Al/Buffy just became my new favorite pairing. The only thing that confused me was Buffy's "strategy". What did she do exactly?
Legendary Chimera
2009-10-08 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh this is pure gold! Hughes is adorable as ever and poor Buffy! I think you had Willow down perfectly. I love how you refer to alchemists as "circle people" and I think Ed would love your description of the tatoo. (You know, his gothic taste and all. ;P) Mr. Gordo was a nice little touch.

I also like how you deal with both fandoms. You don't assume everyone knows about our beloved FMA so non anime fans are kind of on the same page as the slayer.

I can tell this is going to be a good one. Keep up the good work!

~Mulzrule from lj <3
Xoroth
2009-10-02 . chapter 31
Great story so far.
Flitter-Flutter
2009-09-13 . chapter 31
Dark!Willow...no, I hate Dark!Willow...
Darn. Last chapter. I guess I'll have to wait and see if it gets updated. Please don't leave me on an evil cliffhanger, please! :(
Flitter-Flutter
2009-09-13 . chapter 29
Vampires taste bad. They are also bad for your stomach. I hate Archer. The is still feeling of awesomeness. I am sad because I am near the end of this fic. :(
Flitter-Flutter
2009-09-13 . chapter 27
No, Buffy! Snap out of it!

At least they busted Ed out...but he's probably in all sorts of trouble with the military now, isn't he?

I really loved the irony of Winry thinking, "It's not like Barry the Chopper's going to come back to life."

I also loved how blunt Sheska was: "I'm a hostage. Give me something to read." That was fun. :D
Flitter-Flutter
2009-09-13 . chapter 26
Not Roy, too?! This has become a let-the-vampires-feed-on-FMA-characters hey day, hasn't it?
Poor Ed...I can't imagine being locked up with Kimbley for company...
I liked how Scar reflects on the three years ago in Central. (Flitter~Flutter looks at own fic and laughs her head off.) :D
Flitter-Flutter
2009-09-13 . chapter 25
Aww. Love Innocent!Wrath! Yays! :D
Flitter-Flutter
2009-09-13 . chapter 21
So, Ed got kidnapped and bitten by some random vampire? Oh my gosh...poor Ed...

"Adrenaline," not "adrenalin." Also, "homunculus" singular, "homunculi" plural. Lust is not "A homunculi", she's "a homunculus." There. Just had to say that...:)

Still awesomeness, yays! (goes off to read more)
Flitter-Flutter
2009-09-13 . chapter 20
No, Scar! Don't kill Buffy! D:
No, Hughes, we're not dealing with another Barry the Chopper...I think Scar may have actually killed more people, so technically he's worse...
How dare you end on a cliffhanger...sob
Flitter-Flutter
2009-09-13 . chapter 19
So...Scar's in the game now...
Where did the Slicer Brothers and Barry the Chopper run off to? :(
Flitter-Flutter
2009-09-13 . chapter 18
Hmm. Dawn. A refreshing break from the kick-rear-end Slaying action of the past several chapters...however, I was never a big fan of Dawn. But it's still fun; I love how Wrath was asking every female in view if she was his mommy!
Flitter-Flutter
2009-09-13 . chapter 16
Ed: Nah. Flannel pajamas...not intimidating enough...
Buffy: It's only natural when you're sick. By the way, I stole all your cool Lab 5 scenes from you.
Ed: What?!
Buffy (smirks)
Ed: not...my...cool...lab 5 scenes...I will...have revenge...

Anywho, lovely job. However, "huh" is spelled "huh," not "hu". Just something I've been noticing when you've used it...
Flitter-Flutter
2009-09-13 . chapter 14
OMG...Slicer, and Barry, and Greed, and Tucker...and Dolcetto and Martel and Loa and everyone...
Gaa! They're all here! Lab 5 rocks!*breaks into fangirl squeals*
Again, it is made of awesomeness. Kudos to you :D
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