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Reviews For: Improvisation

elizabethlives
2008-06-25
ch 2,
abuse" iwant chicken lol
Charity Angel
2008-02-13
ch 2,
abuseWow. That was one of the hottest bedroom scenes I have ever read! I find myself quite speechless (yeah, just click the review button whilst your brain is still visualising, great idea...).
emuroo
2007-10-10
ch 2,
abuseThis is really, really good. He wants chicken. That is so Sirius.
afraidofreality
2007-06-11
ch 2,
abuseaww :]
whyamInotsleepingatthishour...
2006-12-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseHe wants chicken. HAHAHAHAHA. Yea, well, we all want chicken (if you know what I mean). That was seriously well written, though I did keep wondering 'how many goddamned layers of clothing do these guys have?' Very witty, too.
MinervaEvenstar
2006-11-24
ch 2,
abuseThat scene was unbelievbly sexy! I love Remus, so I would give anything to be Sirius in this chapter. The ending was very amusing!
MinervaEvenstar
2006-11-23
ch 1,
abuseThis line was BRILLIANT 'wondering why he was always wearing fewer clothes faster than Sirius' :.)
Jesse
2006-11-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseOMFG this is so good. honestly, who couldnt have a mind bloody blowing orgy just by reading this. either that or i dont have any self control! keep on writing!
Kitty Went Cuckoo
2006-10-30
ch 2,
abuseWow... That, my friend, was amazing. The detail; the emotion. You've left me speechless. I can't believe this story doesn't have any reviews, yet! It's so...breathtaking.

There's honestly nothing I can tell you to improve on. You did an excellent job. Congrats. =]

*hands you a cookie and favs*

Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing more stuff from you. =D

Love always,
Kitty
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