|Reviews for Chess|
| goldilocks-13fold 9/20/06 . chapter 1
Wow, what an original idea! I loved it!
| ChildO'God 9/18/06 . chapter 1
OMFG! ITS SO CUTE XD. soo cute at the end! XD. squeel!
| evilbrownie 9/16/06 . chapter 1
o_o... How sweet!
I like the way the reality thing was related to the chess game.
It was really well-written, and I don't think anyone has written something like this for this category.
Great job, and I'll also place this in my favorites if you don't mind. :D
| jackie-88-ac 9/16/06 . chapter 1
Wow. Nice ending. I didnt expect that. So cute. Yep. Great Job! Keep up the good work!
| tanth 9/15/06 . chapter 1
How sweet of Cagalli. It's just something she would really do! Love it!
| NEET 9/15/06 . chapter 1
Um, good fic.
I,m going to put it in favorites
| Moments of Insanity 9/15/06 . chapter 1
this is a really sweet story, and very original. hope to see you write more.
| mumyou nanashi 9/14/06 . chapter 1
oh, yeah, i remember that pic. the artist is really talented. and so are you. i thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. and your writing style is entertaining.
it does seem like cagalli to be so motivated after dullindal's advice. her moves were in-character, to put it bluntly. the amount of romance didn't make me cringe (which i tend to do nowadays - don't ask) and i actually remembered why i liked the athrun-cagalli pairing.
i love the pawn comment - very much like shinn. i think cagalli (and the chairman as well) should see that it's a premonition of things to come.
although, i think i would have found it more realistic if dullindal won. it IS chess after all. but that's just me. i think that's my villain side talking.
THANK YOU for writing this story. i really mean it. just when i thought all hope was gone, poof! this shows up. it totally made my day.
| JenEvan 9/14/06 . chapter 1
Chess and reality a nice AC story
| i Mel-chan i 9/14/06 . chapter 1
Simply adorable! I'm the same way when it comes to chess. Loved Athrun being used as an analogy as the knight.
| 945466 9/14/06 . chapter 1
Very interesting. This was well written too. - I really enjoyed reading it. Hope I'll read more of your fanfics in the future. )
| risingsundynasty 9/14/06 . chapter 1
Hmm, this story is very good! I like it! Keep up the good work!
| whitelilies 9/14/06 . chapter 1
I loved that last line . The concept of the chess game is lovely. I've always that that Cagalli would be the White King since there is only so much she could do for her country against others. But having Orb as the King fitted as well...nice job _
Just a few things though:
Since this is a meeting between two politictions, Cagalli wouldn't be so casual. She would use proper language. Using something like 'so...yeah' wouldn't do in a time like that.
| Athyra 9/14/06 . chapter 1
Very well written! And yes, I've sen meander's fanart before, and I can see how you've got the inspirations! And...I love it_ (although, Athrun, express how you feel about this afterwards when you're alone with Cagalli properly...-_-)