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Mischivous Purple One
2009-12-04 . chapter 1
*blinks and shivers* Wow...creepy...and yet, awesome all in one. That was cool, and very well written. :)
123-321
2009-11-20 . chapter 1
that was great
Artanis
2009-11-16 . chapter 1
Oh goddess, that was terrifying...like Stephen King all over again. Nice! Voldy-Riddle in the woods...
Kalaert
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
Oh my god. This was beautiful. I felt it crawling under my skin. The comparisons...Harry's quiet serenity against Dudley's outrageous behaviour...the cheerful beauty of the class to the sinister mood...normal children's mentality to Harry's, well, freakiness...

It was simply lovely, in a macabre sort of way. A true 'masterpiece'. And the part at the end, with Harry being aware he had created a sentient picture...Harry being able to even DO that...that was simply genius. I'm actually speaking in short bursts because I'm trying to absorb said simplistic genius of your story. By absorb, I mean my mind is already spinning something about Artist!Harry and Dark!Harry at Hogwarts or...

Okay, let's just say, you created something that feels like it wants to burst out of my chest, something that is fizzing in the back of my head. And I love it. Thank you. Your story is the best thing that I've read in a month of Sundays.
EterNite
2009-10-28 . chapter 1
Aww! Harry is a lil' creeper :D
shenmi meiren
2009-10-23 . chapter 1
cute!
writerspeak
2009-10-05 . chapter 1
the was just creepy and wired and right up my alley. good work.
darkmoon666
2009-09-23 . chapter 1
I like this story and the idea :). So the man is Voldemort's wandering spirit in the forest and the snakes are his? Very creative
~Moony
Googleyum
2009-09-22 . chapter 1
aw... little harry is so cute :)
darklordmike
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
Absolutely brilliant. You create an aura of horror better than any other fanfic writer I've encountered. Well done.
BlondeSlytherin
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
Very different. I'm not quite sure what it was about and if it was less well written I wouldn't be reviewing but your story captures the reader. I would guess that the lanky man is Voldemort but I'm not quite following how or what he did to the teacher. Very good work of written none the less... or perhaps because of that? I don't know. I shall now go see if you have any other stories I want to read.
Whitetree-Nimloth
2009-08-04 . chapter 1
Now, that's one frightening story. Kind of disturbing, too. One does wonder what exactly is happening, with Voldemort and Harry... You write it quite well. ^^
expiry 4.23
2009-08-03 . chapter 1
This was brilliant! I think Miss Wentworth was bang on -- it's made all the creepier by Harry's being a young child. And then that closing bit...very chilling. I loved it!
hollyivy7
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
holy freaking. amazing. horror at its best.
dragongirlG
2009-07-20 . chapter 1
Wow! This is very original and very well-done. If you changed the names, this could actually be a really wonderful original horror piece. I love how Ms. Wentworth is suddenly "sucked into" the picture - and the description of the forest (Forbidden Forest?) and Voldemort is quite good and intriguing.
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