oh do i smell trouble... while dad's away at that LOL another really good chapter... even written before house of the holy...great job

Ok I don't know how i've missed this story... need to pay closer attention i guess... love it so far...there is something about that dean... great job

I love Dean playing baseball (and being good at it). :-)

I also like Caleb as a 'big brother' figure to Dean. I can't believe Sam didn't show up to Dean's ballgame, that's just so wrong, Sammy. :-)

fantastic fic. I love the brotherhood which ridley made, and I love that your writing fics with the same characters. Just adore caleb and the relationship between him and dean. i hope to see more of your fics soon! This story was excellent i absolutely ADORED this last chapter. the scene when caleb cheered for Dean was so cute. can't wait to see more from you!

I liked this story. There was something about it that was a little different. I hope that you will write more soon.

I liked the ending with Caleb. Dean definately needs a positive role model during his teens.

I also liked that you concluded fairly firmly, but left things just vague enough to make the reader wonder more about angels. Do you have another story up your sleeve?

Good job on the story. I enjoyed it. Thanks!

Being a great fan of Ripley's work, I had to read yours. I like what you've done with Caleb.

I plan to read more of your work. It is very well done.

Tidia,

I so enjoyed this story. I loved the way it gave us another little insight into Dean's character. It was so original all the way through, and even though I knew the plot twist, I thought it was edge of the seat wondering how she knew those things about the Winchesters. I know you're working on something new and I can't wait to read it, and get the inside scoop.

Ridley

So Brenda died. I can see that. She was a tortured soul and add that to the normal teenage crap we all go through... This was good chapter and I always love seeing this Caleb.

I didn't mind Ellen and Jo - as long as they don't become HUGE regulars. Thanks for the addresses. I will definitely use them!

Another fine chapter! :)

"some things are supposed to be a mystery." Nice. And you left it that way, too. :)

Great job on the wrap-up. I enjoyed the story. Thanks for writing.

Good ending !

Oh, wasn't expecting that...okay more :)

Nice ending to the chapter. It's just like Dean to accept all that John dished out and then comfort Sam's anxiety with normal behaviour. Your John reacted in a believable way; lay on a layer of guilt and leave the rest unspoken disappointment. Dean's reaction was good, too. I was surprised that he didn't tell his Dad that he wanted to go too, although I really liked the 'no harm no foul' comment. It was just the right sassiness.

Good chapter. I'm looking forward to the next.

Aww... That was kind of a sad chapter! Poor Dean.

Very well done.

Looking forward to more, though. There are still some unaswered questions (and the promise of another appearance by Caleb :) ). I'd love to see the answers to those questions vindicate Dean some, at least to himself. *shakes fist at John*

Very good! Poor Dean! He just breaks my heart! Great job. Looking forward to the rest.