This fanfic is AMAZING! The vivid detail and how you captured the action was fantastic! Almost like a real novel.

I endorse this event or product.

I don't know much about the actual series; however, your colorful descriptions made the story enjoyable. The only problem I could find with it was in the third part: "but they were were just looking at a facade." Other then that, great job! Can't wait to read your next story.

By the way,

Awesome Title! ^.~

Good stuff. Really liking what you've got so far. You really go into depth with all this and make it understandable. Please continue!

I like it so far..I think it's pretty well written...oh yea, your account said you don't accept anyomous(sp?) reviews. You should change that, more people will review this fic..^^