YOU HAVE TO KEEP WRITING! i need 2 no what happens. u are a good writer. keep it up :P

Man, thats just creepy and extremely cruel of you to end the chapter there! I want to see what happens next! plez update soon!
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O. I like it. I like it. So many tasty little things happening. I must say i look forward to see what Slade has in store for Robin.

Looking forward to the next chapter, particularly because you didn't write more on your other story.

*ahem* DUH!! Of course Slade is back, why else would Robin be ticked off? hee! I love it! Keep up the good work! have a cupcake!

this was neat. i would like to read more. your jake guy was interesting.

I'm interested. Could you update soon, please?

Wow...nice story. I love the writing and the plot is great--you only let us in on a timbit of the information to keep us hanging. I hope you update soon. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

~Standing ovation
~Alexnandru Van Gordon

update soon please!

This is obviously the beginning of a briliant story! I can't wait to find out what happens next.

wow! this is amzing! I really want to know more about this Jake carracter, he's pretty suspicious. well, anyway, I just wanted you to know I really liked this first chapter and am looking forward to more! plez update soon!
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Cool, but I'm waiting for Slade to show up. I LOVE SLADE! And whats with the kid switching in and out of the australian accent?

Awesome work Liobit. The Jake dude seems pretty cool. But he's evil, right? He seems like it. More please. ^^