I love this story. It's a new take on both the W.i.t.c.h universe and the relantionship between Will and Caleb. I have reread it again and again but I have to ask, when are you going to update? A lot of people are looking forward to the next chapter and this story has too great of a plot to just give up on it. Please update soon.

Great first chapter! I love how you made Caleb's personality so bitter and hateful. It's an interesting variation from the norm.

Fatanstic first chapter! the changes that you made to the story are very interesting and incredibly dark. Having Caleb have that much resentment for his own people will definately make for a very different story.

Hiya.

I have read, and reread this story over ten times.
It is one of my favouritess, because of the extreme amount of details it contains. I love details.

Every chapter is reat, and interesting, and leaves you wanting to read the next.

So i beg of you... hurry and get the next chapter out!
from LadyLady1994 aka Kissa

You haven't updated in a while but what you have is rather filling. The way you've kept the same basic plot and yet expanded and changed it is amazing. I particularly enjoyed the whole 'mating' thing. I could so see that happening. I'm also really interested in findout out how that whole thing pans out and am more then a little curious about how Caleb would react if Will's daddy did show up again. If that did happen I'm sure it would be far enough down the line that Caleb would at least care that his mate/wife was unhappy. Anyway, this is an awesome story and I totally look forward to more. Keep up the great work!

This story is actually really good (considering I was highly disappointed in the carton, seriously, it could be way better). One thing though, you're using way too few "o"s. Meaning, you have never once in this story used the word "too". Do it, because it looks so wrong when there is a missing O to

Wow, I read your other story "The Will to Live" and I'll admit, I like this one so much more. I love how you make Caleb as a 'heroic noble' guy with dark motives and how Will is the only one to fully realize that. I'm kinda curious as to why this is M rated though...

I do hope you'll update this fic because you got a fan intrigue and curious to know where you are taking this. Please do update.

when are you going to finish this story? It takes ages to find a good Will/Caleb story, and this one is brilliant!

Pleae hurry and finish it!

Your story is very good, I like the twist form the original story line. I can't wait for your next chap it sounds really intresting. Have a fantastic week. =)

I LOVE your story! Will and Caleb 4-ever! Please update soon!

Please Please pleasefinish this story.
its absolutely bloody brilliant

This is by far the best Will/Caleb fic I've EVER seen. PLEASE update it soon!

Very good, I hope yo read more from you soon. I have read this story several timed and I can't get over how good it is. Please update soon!

great story it had me shaking!

*cries anime tears* please...update...can't live...without...knowing...what...comes...next...