I've really enjoyed it so far! Though, being from England myself I must say you've missed out on all the fun parts of the UK, and unless you stay in Hostels you're not likely to find shared bathroom facilities here anymore... OH! And you'll never, ever, EVER find a cabbie that doesn't talk to you during the journey, especially in London!

The grammar/spelling is really good, Foreman's missus is a bit too perfect at times but that can be overlooked as it is one of the best Chameron fics I've read on ffnet. Looking forward to finishing this!

Uh Immungoical is the study of organs
Imuge(SP)?what every the heck 13 ish Disease
XD lots of sp
:3 I did reasearch:D

Woow. I'm utterly impressed. This was an amazing story. You have the writing skills, the humor, the romance (not over the top)... I especially loved how you portraited Chase as a complex and slightly damaged person, without pitying him too much. And of course, Pamela is a wonderful character, I wish I would have met your coworker =D
Thank you for writing, I love this story!

Xx

great story, loved it:D

i like pam. she's very amusing.

I spent a good part of the day reading Ducklings, with the exception of 3 hours to watch my team get beat by the lowly Tigers, and I have to confess: I loved this story.

You did make some changes in the characters, but you also provided more than ample motivation for those changes. Really House is the only one I think you went overboard on and I can live with that.

Great story and a very nice read. Thank you for your talents and your time.

Cute story :) Really appreciated the Foreman and Pamela bit, he seems way to underused sometimes. Although Cameron did seem like quite an insufferable bitch, just imo.

Anyway, just a general comment? It'll be much more natural if you'd use contractions in your dialoge, like 'can't' instead of 'cannot', 'they're' instead of 'they are'... I don't know, maybe it's a cultural thing, but the dialogue just seemed more awkward that way.

Thanks for a great story though!

this is so o o o o o o o o o o o o cute!

I really love this story, and can't wait to read more of your work.

one word... amazing =)

WOW! This was amazing! You captured each of the characters so well and I'm so happy Foreman found a girlfriend/wife in this fic because I haven't read to many with him. You are a fabulous writer and for the past 2 days I have fallen in love with your work especially this story! Keep up the good work! :)

Oh my gosh! I just spent the past 3 days reading this wonderful increadible story! This is by far my favorite Chase/Cameron story ever! (btw I'm grappig47 over at LJ) Ah! I would so read this again if it wasn't so long (not that I'm complaining) You are a wonderful writer and I loved this so dearly!

BEST.FANFICTION.EVER.

- that's all there is to it :)

Hi!
I said to you that I was going to read Take the Ducklings Bowling! I lvoe the way you write!
Love this fic. It was fun and fluff as I like!
I read this in one day.
Now I want to read the 23 chapter of When You Least Expect It.
Keep up the good work!

This is so great. I can't wait for when the two finaly fall in love