|Reviews for A Minor Problem|
| MyBatBoys 9/21/06 . chapter 1
That was great!
| Luc Star 9/18/06 . chapter 1
For someone who admittedly is not used to writing the funnies, you sure did a good job Gaia. I’m just sorry it took me this long to get to this fic. I’ll check out a few of the others. I’ve never been much for fluff so forgive me if I skip a few along the way. Take care and once again - you did great. Keep it up.
| Siriuslover4eva 9/16/06 . chapter 1
OMG! I absolutly LOVED it! Keep on going! You're such a great writer, and I love BM/WW! You write it so well! I LOVE YOU KELLY!
| Artemis 85 9/16/06 . chapter 1
lol jinxed it, lol! DAMMIT! lol...just... ! great one dude!
| irony882 9/15/06 . chapter 1
This is your first humor fic? Well, it's a great first! I like the way you've made Bruce seem more human, having hiccups and all, especially with the bonus visit from Diana!
| kitkatfox 9/15/06 . chapter 1
Heheh, that was a lovely bit of fluffy humor goodness. I like the image of Mr. Awesome Cool Professional superhero Batman trying to hide hiccups in a hallway. Love the bit with J'onn probably knowing what Batman's doing. But of course, he's too polite to say anything. Fluffy goodness was awesome. You're a very good writer.
The ending was the best!
(I've always been told sucking something through a straw works *wink*)
| alittlesummerwine 9/15/06 . chapter 1
Sorry it took so long to review, but I thought this was hilarious! I still have a huge smile on my face. ] See? It's funny because it never occurs to me that they are regular people who have the same issues and foibles that we do sometimes - like the hiccups. I'm surprised he doesn't carry around some sort of Bat-tonic for hiccups in his belt. Bet he goes home tonight to create one. And PS - Go Diana! Taking advantage of his self-consciousness to sneak in under his guard. I loved it!
| whylime 9/15/06 . chapter 1
no time to sign, just popping in while at work
great story! I hate getting the hiccups. Some people with kidney problems get hiccups that can last for months as a side effect - good thing thats probably not what Batman has.
hope you get your muse under control soon!
| Who do you think 9/15/06 . chapter 1
But it was oh so very humorous, Lovie.
Torturing Bruce is the best way to start the day.
| dwparsnip 9/15/06 . chapter 1
I don't see any need to apologize either.
That was great!
| Icha 9/14/06 . chapter 1
What's apologizing for?
THis is SO FUNNY! I laughed out loud! True! NEver thought of Bats having hiccup! And it's not even fixed with Diana's kisses!
And thanks for sharing Dick's craze over pizza. I had writter him and Donna enjoying fettuccini, but I think I will change it to pizza instead...
| Dreamlight 9/14/06 . chapter 1
Lol, definately cute. I would love to see this in an actual comic or cartoon of Batman