This was cute, lots of crying from Nara though I enjoyed her vulnerabilities and the added 'companions don't get pleasure' thing

But Mal sounded really really western. More so than in the show it was hard at times to even picture him behind the words

Cute story though, well planned. Thnx for the read.

Just discovered Firefly, just found this story, just had to say - it's beautiful! Makes me happy. Thanks : )

I loved this story! So sweet it almost made me cry...thank you!

That was really beautiful, I loved it.

very nice story! I really love it!

oh, it's perfect. i have this hueg fangirl grin on my face adn at teh same time my eyes are trying to tear up. so good, so sweet and meaningful.

cd

Sigh, excellent piece. Beautifuly composed, great story, alltogether wonderful, mad props!

Oh, wow, 2 in the morning, and I have a 10:30 class, but I just CANNOT stop reading your stories, I LOVED this addendum and the "fic" that came before it, it was all so well written (I am a Mal/Inara man whore so yeah ;P) Lovely work, I hope you have something more in the works for some point in time, thank you for writing this, I loved it!

I loved this fanfic! I caught a couple of places where words seemed to be left out my Inara, which didn't really make sense (if they were made by Mal I could understand it) but otherwise everything was great!

What a lovely piece. The detail was WONDERFUL. You really express the doubt they have in themselves fantastically. Thanks again for another great piece, Lattelady!

What a great story! I love Mal and Inara, and I think you've done a wonderful job capturing their characters. I wish the movie would have ended this way. Bravo!

(I am also really enjoying your other story, Voices and Visions...thanks for all your writing)

Loved it. Wonderfully well written, you write Mal/Inara so well, I envy you. This was fantastic, I could honestly see that being the way it developed between them. Well done and if you get the crazy urge to write more, I would love to read it!

Ava