very good...please make jou normal again

love it!

What? Just two more?! But it's so good TTATT

love it! when will kaiba find out it's jou? oh i cant wait!

love your story, please update soon.

Yay! Wonderful as usual. The only thing I would suggest is adding some sort of break between scene changes to clear up confusion. Thank you for the update and I will eagerly await the next installment. :)

ok that was ... was ...crazy but i like it its good update soon i do like it i want the story to move on

What the... what's gonna happen? T_T
Must... continue... @.@
Poor Jou. =,(

interesting story, I liked it very much. I hate the cliffhanger. This chapter was really enthralling, and then it ended. I'm looking forward to know why seto is so shocked at the end. XDD
I don't mind when you torture joey a little bit, as long as the story get a good end*lol*
So keep on going. You are a good writer. And sorry for my english...

... he is off the street but now he is seto's bitch i hope he gets to be human again or a vampire oh and one more thing please don't make it like weeks or years later but i love it you are very good please update

Yay for quick updates!! :3 Thanks!
Can't wait for more!

Yes!
Please update soon :3

WAAHH! Why?!!? Why do you torture poor Jounouchi? Why not that bastard Kaiba? (He's the jerk who'd probably want immortality after all. lol.)

aww, give jou a hug! love it

man it was short but i like it i want more more more i