Interesting...so creepy...I love it!
Oddly enough, you've got me hooked already. ;D

I'll admit, I almost was scared away by this chapter, but I'm gonna keep reading. I really wanna find out why Jou is so...ugly.

Is he gonna get better? Like..is his hair going to come back and stuff? Poor Jou! I miss his hair. o.o

Update soon please! ;)

i loved it,i think it's any awsome story. well i do like vampires alot so maybe that's why lol. well i hope you update soon because i want to know what happens next i can't wait.^_^

omg that was soo good plz go on i was like freaked and omg his hair

Yay.

I love ygo and the vampire masquerade.

hehe...

Write more!

Love,
Kuro

Dude! You killed Tristan! You can't do that! That's just like... not right. Oh my god, I hate you forever now!

*sobs in corner* Oh Tristan, you were too young...

Anyway, congragulations on the non-cliche vampire story. I read your summary and I was like, "An original vampire story?!! Now way. It's all been done before." But you pulled it off. Congragulations. Now only if you could've done it without killing Tristan, you mutha**in' goddamn BASTARD! Ho!

Sorry, I'm grieving.

Where was I, oh right. WTF is up with the nastiness! *sobs* The nastiness is icky! And I know I'm complaining about these things even though they make the story original and interesting, but YOU KILLED TRISTAN GODDAMIT! I WILL NEVER FORGIVE YOU! EVAH!

*sob sob sob... sob*

That was great! I wish Jou wun look like dat for d rest of the story though. Anyhowz, update soon!

wow! so tristan's dead?! z'OMG please update soon that was a great chapter and I want to know if Jou will ever get his gorgeous blonde hair back! lol.

I'm interested. So, is jou going to look like that for the rest of the story? I'm asking b/c I cant imagine him looking like that forever. This is an interesting fic though and I do look forward to reading more.

AWW tristan... love the fic! love joey!

You're off to a great start. Deliciously creepy. Can't wait for more.

oh! i am excited to read more! i cannot wait untill seto and jou run into each other...^_^ please update soon! i realy want to read more!!

I really want to read more. I like how the story is going so far ^^
Please update soon.

hehe I can See Duke Devlin as a prissy Toreador.-ahem-Anywho! Yeah I really enjoyed reading that first chapter and Jou's notes(half-price beer night 0,^*) lol. Wa! Jou's lovely hair is falling out! >,

so far i love it!