 mooree 2009-12-07 . chapter 5This is so funny! I love it a lot. Please write some more...it's a really good story. |
 lastcrazyhorn 2009-10-18 . chapter 5More? *pokes Arualcopia* More? |
 UchihaxSasukexox 2009-09-25 . chapter 5Why...haven't...you...updated...? TTOTT |
 DanielleTaylorCullen 2009-09-22 . chapter 5Update i love it! |
 meloncholic monochrome 2009-09-14 . chapter 5 shall i suppose that this high-quality kid!fic is on a permanent hiatus? or is it more along the lines of being forgotten for the rest of eternity? either way, i would greatly appreciate if you took up necromancy and revived it, yes? it's far too interesting to keep in a death-like state. |
 misundersnape 2009-08-20 . chapter 5This is funny, sweet, gooey and a tad awkward all at the same time... Merlin I hope the boys remember everything! LOL!
I particularly appreciated the turnaround on most de-aging fics where everyone else (Minerva, Lupin, Poppy etc) didn't think it was a good idea that Severus take Harry... and in fact, this is slightly more believeable, that Sev would take Harry because he was quiet and less trouble. I like this concept... I think I'd be concerned about Sev taking the boy he makes no secret about loathing... but we know he'd never really harm him, don't we! ;)
Nice fic, more please,
misundersnape... |
 Shiki 2009-08-19 . chapter 5 I absolutely adore this story! I sure hope it hasn't been abandoned. :) |
 jim 2009-08-14 . chapter 5 Good |
 lady kae 2009-08-05 . chapter 5 i really liked it, you should definitely keep updating |
 nefari 2009-07-17 . chapter 5I really enjoyed the chapters so far. I hope you continue to update. |
 ginervaweasleyrocks 2009-06-26 . chapter 5 pls continue the story!i really love it. |
 arzoo aisha chand 2009-06-21 . chapter 5 Please continue with your story! I just love the way about this story, I just can't wait to read the rest of you wonderful story! PLEASE continue with your story I just love it! |
 hert 2009-06-13 . chapter 5 please continue with your story! |
 KarentheUnicorn 2009-06-10 . chapter 1Excellent idea and use of Severus; I love him being put in a situation with toddlers!
Great writing, couldn't stop till I finished the chapter. Love the interaction between the characters in this chapter and they seem dead on accurate in how I would imagine them. |
 dragongirlG 2009-06-10 . chapter 5This story is really cute! I can't wait to see what happens when they get older, especially if you write them aging gradually from toddler into children to teens. Good luck! |