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| WickedPookie 2008-05-10 ch 11,  | abuseSo good, cannot wait for more, I can't help but think there is more to the whole than your letting up... and I know the connectio btwn the boys :D but I wont ruin it for anyone else :P |
| BrownEyes 2008-05-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust a little side note: I do like the first few chapters I have read so far, but keep an eye on the spelling. Also in chapter 1, and this may be a typo, but you stated that Reid started at the BAU under Aaron Hotchner and James Gideon. Gideon's first name was Jason. |
| Sue1313 2008-05-07 ch 11, | abuseI love this story. Reid is in love - you just know something bad is waiting to happen. He is just so cute with her. You have written the characters so well. I loved his fear in going down the black hole. I still wonder about the mirror on the door down there. Can't wait for more. I am really enjoying this story. |
| nightangelx18 2008-01-19 ch 10, | abuseThis story is still good. But once again I noticed that you haven't updated in awhile. I just hope you're planning on completing this story because it's really good. And you left it at such a cliff hanger. I must know what's behind the mysterious mirrored door. I hope you update soon. I can't wait to read what happens next. :P |
| Vanillastar 2007-12-09 ch 10, | abuseI love it! You have to update soon!! |
| tearbos 2007-12-03 ch 10, | abuseOhh...suspensefulness...what's behind the creepy door?? can't wait for more not sure about the whole drabble thing...need more info... |
| foxyladyhubbards 2007-12-01 ch 10, | abusePoor Reid, I've rappelled myself and it can be fun, but not when you are doing it in the dark. Update soon |
| Twisted Truth 2007-12-01 ch 10, | abuseLots of darkness. Mariyah is a very cool character. I like it. Please update. |
| Danny's Friend 2007-11-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey. You do know that 'genii' is not actually the plural of 'genius', right? The way you're using the word genius, the plural should be geniuses. 'Genii' is only the appropriate plural when you're refering to the guardian spirit 'genius' of Roman mythology (One posessed either a 'genius' or a 'juno' based on gender). Sorry, but that's been bugging me for months. |
| nightangelx18 2007-11-02 ch 9, | abuseThis story is really good. I was so disappointed when I noticed that you haven't updated in a while, a very long while. O.K. maybe not that long. Anyways, I just hope you update soon because you left it at a good part and I just can't wait to read about what happens next. :P |
| Lum 2007-11-01 ch 9, | abuseI like the premise of the story. I hope to read more, so please don't keep us waiting for the next chapter for too long. :) |
| Twisted Truth 2007-10-28 ch 9, | abuseReally, cool. Please update soon, I wanna see where the crawl space leads. |
| Archer14 2007-10-26 ch 9, | abuseO, a secret crawl space in a young man's room- that could be interesting! Looking forward to see where the story goes from here! Archer14 |
| tearbos 2007-10-21 ch 9, | abuseYeah! They get to go. I wonder what they will find. |
| foxyladyhubbards 2007-10-19 ch 9, | abuseLove the story. Cannot wait to find out more. Please update soon |