This seemed to be written very much in character, ranging from Meiru's more mature and iratable outlook on life to Netto's infectous cheerfulness as well as his more 'serious' side. I liked the little touches you added to improve the realism such as Meiru choking on her toast and Roll's reaction to it. I could see her navi doing that.

We also had that rather impressive second paragraph of figurative language where Rock's feelings are expressed in a very...tacile way. I also liked the way the words 'malicious' and 'curious' were brought together...an acute description of the inner conflict a certain blue navi was expriencing. A bit like an oxymoron in a way...(English terms tend to confuse me every now and then, but you get the basic idea!)

So ya, this was sweet and had a rather mournful undertone to it. I can understand what you were saying about it being hard to end. To be honest I wasn't very satisfied by the way 'mother fixs everything'. To me, it's a simplification. There's no way that Rockman is automatically going to feel better about everything he has missed out on because of a conversation like that. He is in a very unique position after all.

That was really sweet. I still feel bad that Rockman wasn't able to play in the snow with Netto as a "normal" kid would, but their way works well enough for them. I'm glad Haruka was able to cheer him up. I also loved the light banter between friends. Very nice little fic.

aww, this is adorable! I love anything to do with snow with these guys, and it really shows how Rock must've felt, not being able to touch the snow like they could. Awesome fic!

nice, a winter fic before winter is even here. you brought out the emotion of saito, ^_^

Aw, A Haruka fic! ^,^ She's been popular lately, and it's nice to see her getting her due credit. And this was sad, but sweet. A very nice transition there, not too much of either, sdo it worked well as a whole. Excellent! ^^