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hjdevnull
2009-11-06 . chapter 39
This story was awesome.

I don't have a whole lot more coherent to say.
owl3764
2009-11-01 . chapter 39
That was a great read.
Very well done.
Looking forward to the sequel and maybe some of your shorter stories.
LilyJames addict
2009-10-31 . chapter 39
oh my GOD! there's MORE?!?! i just spent over two months reading this story, which was amazing by the way, but it's not resolved! ah!
anyway, very nice story, i enjoyed oit so much that i didn't do my homework for the last week so that i could finish it.
salty-sarah
2009-10-25 . chapter 39
this was bloody brilliant! every moment of this was perfectly timed and perfectly paced, and with the old universe melding seamlessly into the new- i think you did an absolutely fantastic job writing this. i loved the characters you invented and extrapolated here, and the melding of the two times wasn't cliché, as it might've been, but bittersweet, as might've been expected. although i'm not sure might've been expected isn't cliché (o:

i thoroughly enjoyed your fic, and am looking to read the next one! cheers!
Flidar
2009-10-12 . chapter 37
There is a fault in ch 37 of Altered Destinies. James says he meets Grindelwald for the first time, but they already faced of during the diversion to get Christina into England. I'm sorry if this appears to be overly critical, but you can comfort yourself with the thought that I probably only spotted this because I read through your whole story today. It's fantastic.
Riiiceballe
2009-10-03 . chapter 1
-grins- Awesome chapter. :D
How does he do it
2009-09-27 . chapter 18
love it and i can't wait to read more!!
Specterman626
2009-09-22 . chapter 39
wow, this was awesome
Wiberg
2009-09-21 . chapter 39
I cannot remember if I wrote a Review of this fan-fiction before... But, I just reread it once again. I think that was the third or fourth time. Anyway, I still think it's that good. Love every single chapter of it. I do like the Harry Potter parts the best, not that Tom( Riddle) P.O.W. is bad or anything.

I cannot praise this fiction as much as it deserves! Could very possible be better than the books. no it IS better then the seventh book! Honestly, it's very close and I am leaning back with a nice satisfied feeling when finishing this, which is not exactly what I could say of "The deathly hollows"

There is a sequel, so I'll continue over to that - again :P
Lii
2009-09-13 . chapter 39
Well. Um, WOW?!
I've read this story within seven hours and my head hurts from staring at the screen for that long ... but I couldn't stop!
Characterization was incredible, writing style brilliant and plot amazing. And now I think I better go have a cup of tea and a lie down before I try tackling the sequel. Time-turning makes my brain confused! ;)
Wonderful job, I can't wait to read more of your work.
- Lii
Thaliran
2009-09-12 . chapter 39
A truly facinating story. mixing history and the books. I have only one thing to say poor harry
IdSayWhyNot
2009-09-10 . chapter 1
Really loved this one. I'm waiting on the updates of BD.

If I had to post some criticism, I'd say you need to work on some spelling and grammar. There are a few mistakes like "quite" and "quiet" or "there" and "their". It's not exactly a HUGE mistake but it's there.

As for the rest... BLOODY BRILLIANT. Excellent plotline!!

I was hoping to write some time travel that included Grindelwald but I'm not sure I can do better than you and I doubt I can remain creative after reading yours...

Anyway, congratulations and hope you get the chance to read my fan fic. I'm laying off the time travel for now. Some day, maybe... (sigh)

IdSayWhyNot
Billy
2009-09-08 . chapter 7
Because Harry is a Bat animagus, who watched too much sesame street
leona-the-critic
2009-09-06 . chapter 12
What the? When did Dumbles learn Harry/James was from the future? I've enjoyed this so far, but now I'm seriously confused. I don't remember that!
hurlebibi
2009-09-02 . chapter 39
seriously, I think this might be the best potterfiction i've ever read... (and i've read thousands of these thing...)

making a tom riddle's redemption story is just brilliant!

Are you sure you're american? -_O you know more about the events of the WW2 than anybody I know...

The only thing weird in your story..."Andrea"?"Alajos"?? "Sardonnes"? XD that's maybe spanish or portuguese, but that definitively NOT french names!

Appart from that (which is me searching for microscopic mistakes), I really enjoyed ready your story.

*go looking for the sequel*

~Hurlebibi
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