OMg i totally love it.

you're doing such a great job. It's funny, cute, and other words i can't think of. I swear you nailed Logan's character, it's so prefect. Rory's too. i can't wait to see what happens. keep going. again great job 10/10 :)

Wow. Definitely worth the wait! I really like your interactions between Rory and Logan. I think they are very realistic and witty, whether they are happy or angry with each other. The only thing I can suggest is your usage of the word "seize". I just reread this entire story because, well, it's amazing, and I noticed this word several times when I think you actually meant to use the word "cease". Anyways, just a suggestion ) Great work! Please update soon! I love this story!

oh poor Logan and Rory. I hope they make up soon!

please update soon i love your story.

Aoura

PLease continue soon. I hope he continues to be a jackass for a while making her want to go and him asking for forgivness from her and then living happily ever after

oh wow, how lovely to see another update from you! a beautiful story! i went back and reread stuff, because it has been a while, and i've got a bunch of other stories in my mind, but i remembered it all, and enjoyed reading it again. i love how you have rory and logan having such realistic faults, and having them at least starting to learn to deal with them- if there's one true thing about relationships, it's that they aren't easy, and bring up all the dark, dirty, broken, selfish, ugly areas of your heart. it's obviously what rory is doing with logan, and vice versa. i'm anxiously awaiting seeing them working through the issues and becoming better, more mature people on the other side of it. all in due time, though, i'm sure.

ouch! is all i have to say. lena is a bitch sorry fo rteh languge but she is.

I loved the conversation with Logan and Frank, but Logan's sister is just a troublemaker! Please continue

Loved Frank's awkwardness, I was hoping that Rose sent him up there on purpose or something, cos she seems to be the type of person that would get a kick out of doing that. Oh well.

A quick note: seize is to grab, cease is to stop. I was rereading a few chapters and i think you meant cease in a few spots, but were writing seize instead.

Also, i think it's spelt wuss, not woos. (not that it really matters)

Anyway. great chapter, looking forward to the next update (don't make it months in between again please. *pouts*)

I'll look forward to the update. Also, you must be British, right? I'm guessing from some of your language...

This is so good! I am dying to find out what Rory says/does and Logan's response!

amazing chapter

please update soon..I can't wait

I want to kill Lena!But the rest of the story is really good!

well it sure was worth the long wait i loved the large pink elephants but could you please not make it any harder between rory and logan as it already is...?

It's worth the wait if you update soon. ;-)

They both need to talk to each other. Rory shouldn't stay from going to Paris if Logan doesn't open up to her. I have forgotten how long the Paris visit will be though since it was so many months I read it.

Lena is a little bitch. She needs to get nicer.

gah...it's been too long since i've read this, i didn't even remember who lena was at first, and i'm really fuzzy on the details of what happened in this particular story (ducks head in shame).

but i got the gist of it, and i hope rory can make logan understand soon.