|Reviews for Mother|
| AlchemyOtaku0922 8/3/10 . chapter 1
Very cute. I don't usually support this couple but this is a very good story :) Great job
| deceiving reality 5/4/10 . chapter 1
i loved the ending!
| nukagirl 8/13/08 . chapter 1
wow, how sad, the ending is sweet
| weasleyismyking17 2/25/08 . chapter 1
aw... Trisha would totally understand!
| Bar-Ohki 12/4/07 . chapter 1
| Songfic Misstress 11/4/07 . chapter 1
I'm crying. That was so sweet. Yay for Trisha, Yay for Ed! So Sweet!
| VickyQ 6/8/07 . chapter 1
OMGZ so kyute!
i almost cried! *sniffle*
| TheQueenOfMediocrity 5/27/07 . chapter 1
Just to say in advance, this is not a flame post. I enjoyed the story very much. I just want to point out some minor grammatical errors the computer didn't pick up.
"In the mist of it all, Roy had happened..."
Here, it would be "midst". It's a totally understandable mistake, since the computer wouldn't pick up a properly spelled word as a grammatical errors. It's good to pay careful attention to stuff like that, as in this case the human eye is better than a computer.
I would like to reiterate, though, that I did really enjoy this story very much. It's very beautifully written.
| Roy Mustang 08 5/6/07 . chapter 1
The story was great
| ximashitax 1/18/07 . chapter 1
That was so sweet! I love how you got Ed's character down so well. .
| Rei-Sanjo 12/31/06 . chapter 1
OMFG *fangirl squeal* that was brilliant! Im tearing up. Loved it! Keep writing .
| rawrrawr123rawr 9/23/06 . chapter 1
Mwee! Was this what you were working on since June, Nana? :o And...can I add it to my profile? _; *clasps hands* Please? Because I won't without your permission. ;o
But that was sweet. I adored the ending. Ring of flowers...that's so beautiful and symbolic. n_n I wonder how Roy feels with a ring of flowers around his neck? o.o
I also love how Roy *notices* things and does what he can for Ed's happiness. You portrayed that very well. And the tie-in with "Family"...I think Lina mentioned to me that you were asking about using her characters...x3 *glomp* Wonderful job, Nana. And I'm glad to see you posting. .
| Ame Mika'zuki 9/16/06 . chapter 1
o_o WOW that last part was unexpected and... cool. XD and sweet, too. *dances around* Trisha's welcoming Roy into the family! XD
| Le Soleil Avant Le Crepuscule 9/16/06 . chapter 1
Aw... So sweet!
My only comment would be that you should put some sort of line sperating the author's notes and the story itself.
Other than that, great job.
| wolf00rakuen 9/16/06 . chapter 1
This was so adorable! *sobs*
I must admit I've read a story much like this before, though..